ClubFloyd Transcript:
When the Land Goes Under the Water by Bruno Dias (as Nikephoros De Kloet)
As played on ifMUD on May 31, 2015

The idea behind ClubFloyd is that each week at a pre-arranged time, a group of people meet online to cooperatively play a game of interactive fiction.

Below is a transcript of When the Land Goes Under the Water written by Bruno Dias (as Nikephoros De Kloet). It was a Commended entry in ShuffleComp: Disc 2. You can learn more about the game, including how to download it, by visiting IFDB.


WARNING! Below you will find a transcript of people playing this game, and it goes without saying that the transcript is full of spoilers. So, if you've never played this game, and think you might like to at some point, I do not recommend reading any further. Instead, you might want to return to the interactive fiction page.


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DavidW says, "well, we could play the last of the ShuffleComp games I uploaded a few weeks ago: When the Land Goes Under the Water."
Roger says, "sure"
chaudmin says, "alright"
DavidW says, "I've played it already, but there's two halves, so I'd prefer to play the half I didn't see."
DavidW says (to Floyd), "quit"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > QUIT
Floyd | debugcheapnitfol quit with exit status: 0
Floyd asks, "That game over already? It was just getting good. Wanna play another?"
DavidW says (to Floyd), "load sleepmask whentheland"
Floyd ]
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to restore a saved game?
DavidW says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd | Would you like to restore a saved game?
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | When the Land Goes Under the Water is a purely exploratory piece. The
Floyd | only verbs that are strictly necessary are GO, EXAMINE, LOOK, TAKE,
Floyd | INVENTORY, and SCORE. Others may be implemented. If you intend to
Floyd | write a review or discuss it with others, I suggest you play through
Floyd | it exactly once. For more detailed information, type ABOUT.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "push space"
DavidW pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]
Floyd | She awoke when the sun's glare reached her face, dancing in between
Floyd | the flapping of her sails.
Floyd |
Floyd | When the Land Goes Under the Water
Floyd | a walk among the ashes by Nikephoros De Kloet
Floyd | Release 1 / Serial number 150505 / Inform 7 build 6L38 (I6/v6.33 lib
Floyd | 6/12N)
Floyd |
Floyd | Ruined Square
Floyd | As a girl, she was told that orichalcum was unbreakable; that the
Floyd | green-gold tiles on the floor of the great old Kormákozh Square would
Floyd | outlast and outlive her. Besides the creeping dirt seemingly emerging
Floyd | from between the broken tiles, signs of ruin were around her. The
Floyd | land's breaking has reduced the gilded façades of the shops that
Floyd | surrounded the square to rubble and ashes. Breaks in the surrounding
Floyd | ring of debris were open to the northwest and east.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could see her makeshift raft here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
says (to chaudmin), "The 'push space' action is a button in the Toyshop, not a direct command to Floyd."
chaudmin asks, "huh. how long has it been like that?"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x shops"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SHOPS
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Always. The 'push space', 'push enter', 'push save', and 'clear save' are all external."
chaudmin says, "hm. I see."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x raft"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RAFT
Floyd |
Floyd | Made of reclaimed wood. Buoyant cheap timber used for doors in the
Floyd | poor quarter. The mast was hardwood she recovered from the dining
Floyd | table of some Dúc, whose wife unwittingly gave up her silk sheets for
Floyd | her sails.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x rubble"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RUBBLE
Floyd |
Floyd | In some places, it was little more than mounds of dust, cobbles, and
Floyd | potsherds. She had struggled to find meaning in the debris, to
Floyd | identify what this or that mound of dust and ashes was before the
Floyd | land's breaking. She did not any more.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "hm. I forgot that there's accented letters in this. I won't be able to see them."
Roger says, "the dining room table of some dick"
DavidW says, "Du'c, I think it was."
DavidW says, "Or maybe Du^c."
DavidW says, "I suggest looking at our inventory."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x orichalcum"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ORICHALCUM
Floyd |
Floyd | Orichalcum is bright green and flecked with veins of gold, a nobler
Floyd | marble. Until the land's breaking she had only seen it as it should
Floyd | be: Polished and perfect, unbreakable, eternal. The walls of the
Floyd | Emperor's Palace, the Oceanic Bulwarks, all shone with gleaming green
Floyd | that reflected its tint onto the people and streets of the City. And
Floyd | then they were all shattered like the tiles in the square. Were they
Floyd | even orichalcum at all, she wondered, or just cleverly-painted ceramic
Floyd | glaze? She squinted at them, and could not remember the pattern of the
Floyd | mosaic.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | She was carrying:
Floyd |   the remains of a novitiate's robes (being worn)
Floyd |   a necklace of glass beads (being worn)
Floyd |   an orange and blue sash (being worn)
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x robes"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ROBES
Floyd |
Floyd | Little more than rags, the robes used to mark her as a novitiate of
Floyd | the god Imbelá. Their brilliant white was matted with countless stains
Floyd | – blood, and ashes, and more.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x necklace"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X NECKLACE
Floyd |
Floyd | Each one was perfectly clear, but for a dot of black glass inside
Floyd | them; a reminder of impurity. She thought that it was the day she was
Floyd | supposed to return them to the temple, and take her priest's necklace
Floyd | of pure, clear beads.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x sash"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SASH
Floyd |
Floyd | Her family colours, in the silk of the eyeworm that was reserved for
Floyd | the noble houses. Unlike her robes, they refused to fade or stain –
Floyd | how odd that this miraculous fabric was exclusive to those whose
Floyd | clothes were never soiled.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin asks, "time to explore?"
DavidW says, "If you like."
DavidW says, "The game is all about exploring."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Chanting Row
Floyd | Chanting Row was one of the city's main throughfares. It was wide as
Floyd | four oxcarts abreast, leading from the opulence of the palace quarter
Floyd | all the way to the Eastern Sea Gate.
Floyd |
Floyd | In ages past, pleasure ships would dock right up to the avenue's end,
Floyd | disgorging nobles riding opulent sedan chairs. She had never seen
Floyd | that. Before the land's breaking, the eastern end of the row had been
Floyd | taken over by tenements and poorhouses, a dumping ground for the
Floyd | city's abandoned. The pleasure ships would dock on the Western Sea
Floyd | Gate, instead.
Floyd |
Floyd | This stretch used to run west to east, straight and true, so much so
Floyd | one could see the sea from this end; but then it had become twisted
Floyd | and broken, surrounded by rubble. The square was to the west. The
Floyd | debris formed a slope that one might climb, to the southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x rubble"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RUBBLE
Floyd |
Floyd | In some places, it was little more than mounds of dust, cobbles, and
Floyd | potsherds. She had struggled to find meaning in the debris, to
Floyd | identify what this or that mound of dust and ashes was before the
Floyd | land's breaking. She did not any more.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "se"
Floyd ]  0/12                   Across the DebrExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the Debris
Floyd | Here the debris formed a sort of sloping mound, though the broken
Floyd | ruins squeezed that mound into a narrow defile that ran northwest to
Floyd | east.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  0/12                   Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Behind a Tenement
Floyd | The tenement, to the north, cast a long shadow over this patio. She
Floyd | could not tell it had been a patio; dirt and dust had overtaken the
Floyd | floor. Rubble and debris surrounded her, though she thought she saw a
Floyd | entrance to the temple of Kózh to the east. Another break in the
Floyd | debris allowed movement back west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x tenement"
Floyd ]  0/12                   Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TENEMENT
Floyd |
Floyd | It seemed unsteady, looming over her. Its white granite face had been
Floyd | blackened with ash and pockmarked with damage from an unknown source.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x patio"
Floyd ]  0/12                   Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X PATIO
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  0/12                   Crumbling KitchExits: NE, S, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd | She crossed the threshold into the dark tenement.
Floyd |
Floyd | Crumbling Kitchen
Floyd | The inside was caked with dust and given a yellowing pallor by the
Floyd | sharp light of the sun outside, which flattened the whole room in
Floyd | white. But it seemed mercifully undisturbed. The stairway leading up
Floyd | looked bent, but serviceable. Both the passages to south and northeast
Floyd | remained, though the way to other rooms in the dwelling had crumbled
Floyd | away.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "ne"
Floyd ]  0/12                     Tinsmith LaneExits: N, SW, and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NE
Floyd |
Floyd | She walked out to the broken street.
Floyd |
Floyd | Tinsmith Lane
Floyd | Named after the craftsmen who made their dwellings here, though she
Floyd | had only known Tinsmith Lane as a street inhabited by prostitutes and
Floyd | thieves; among the common folk it had a less kind name. But the land's
Floyd | breaking erased such distinctions: the road was barely recognizable.
Floyd | It was a smear of cobblestones in the maelstrom of debris. Breaks in
Floyd | the rubble allowed passage to the southwest, east, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  0/12                     Ransacked ShoExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd | She found her way into a small shop.
Floyd |
Floyd | Ransacked Shop
Floyd | Shelves long emptied of their wares. It had sold amphorae of cheap,
Floyd | bitter wine and even more bitter herbs - preparations of pennyroyal
Floyd | and silphium. A ragged drapery was hung on one corner of the room, a
Floyd | last reminder of homeliness left behind. The exit was west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x drapery"
Floyd ]  0/12                     Ransacked ShoExits: NE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DRAPERY
Floyd |
Floyd | White, once, though a smear of blood was slashed across it, one man's
Floyd | attempt to debase himself before the gods, before the end. It shifted
Floyd | slightly in the wind.
Floyd |
Floyd | The motion was suspicious. She gingerly lifted the dirty curtain,
Floyd | finding a passage into a dark hiding place behind it to the northeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "ne"
Floyd ]  0/12                      Hidden CacheExits: SW
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NE
Floyd |
Floyd | She went through the hole behind the drapery.
Floyd |
Floyd | Hidden Cache
Floyd | A cubbyhole hastily repurposed to hide away the shopkeeper's few
Floyd | possessions. A passage led southwest, back to the shop.
Floyd |
Floyd | A small glinting mirthstone was abandoned on the floor of the alcove,
Floyd | lighting up the dark space.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x mirthstone"
Floyd ]  1/12                      Hidden CacheExits: SW
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MIRTHSTONE
Floyd |
Floyd | Raw mirthstone. It was worth more than the whole building it was found
Floyd | in. Numerous slaves would die extracting mirthstone from the bowels of
Floyd | the earth; at night, mirthstone gems lit the way in the richest
Floyd | streets in the Palace Quarter. The owner had thought to trade it for
Floyd | supplies, but waited too long; he could not find anyone who would
Floyd | trade food and water for light.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oh good. You found this right away."
chaudmin says, "I take it there's a dark area, then"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "take it"
Floyd ]  1/12                      Hidden CacheExits: SW
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE IT
Floyd |
Floyd | She wrapped her hand in a fold of her robe, and gingerly tied the
Floyd | mirthstone to her sash, careful not to touch it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "sw"
Floyd ]  1/12                     Ransacked ShoExits: NE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Ransacked Shop
Floyd | Shelves long emptied of their wares. It had sold amphorae of cheap,
Floyd | bitter wine and even more bitter herbs - preparations of pennyroyal
Floyd | and silphium. A ragged drapery was hung on one corner of the room, a
Floyd | last reminder of homeliness left behind. The exit was west, or through
Floyd | a hidden passage northeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  1/12                     Tinsmith LaneExits: N, SW, and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Tinsmith Lane
Floyd | Named after the craftsmen who made their dwellings here, though she
Floyd | had only known Tinsmith Lane as a street inhabited by prostitutes and
Floyd | thieves; among the common folk it had a less kind name. But the land's
Floyd | breaking erased such distinctions: the road was barely recognizable.
Floyd | It was a smear of cobblestones in the maelstrom of debris. Breaks in
Floyd | the rubble allowed passage to the southwest, east, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  1/12                     Temple of VelExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd | Weaving into the rubble, she entered a dark temple.
Floyd |
Floyd | Temple of Velê
Floyd | Velê, god of vices, clandestine mother. A place where the poor and
Floyd | wretched of the Tin Quarter would have served men from the Palace
Floyd | Quarter and Velatine Hill.
Floyd |
Floyd | While the walls were made of dirty stone, a gleaming gold effigy of
Floyd | Velê loomed over the altar, still standing in spite of the collapsing
Floyd | roof.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x effigy"
Floyd ]  2/12                     Temple of VelExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X EFFIGY
Floyd |
Floyd | Velê was a tall woman with an impossibly generous figure, clad only in
Floyd | a voluminous cloak. She held the cloak open, displaying a dark cavity
Floyd | within her garment that was said to hold the obscene desires of
Floyd | supplicants within it. Her face was sharply proportioned, beautiful,
Floyd | though mutilated; the patriarch god Pésazh had taken her nose as
Floyd | punishment for her vanity. The statue itself, of course, was cast in
Floyd | violet gold, one and a half times the height of a person.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x cavity"
Floyd ]  3/12                     Temple of VelExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CAVITY
Floyd |
Floyd | The opening of her cloak was an empty recess, big enough to hold a
Floyd | person, or perhaps two if they squeeze together. Supplicants – rich
Floyd | old men from the Venatine Hill – would come to the temple and see
Floyd | their desires appear inside Velê's cloak. Invariably, that desire
Floyd | would be one or two lithe novitiates of the God of Vices.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "enter cavity"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Temple of VelExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER CAVITY
Floyd |
Floyd | The mirthstone lit her way into the alcove, allowing her to see the
Floyd | inside of the recess. It smelled oddly even then, a velvety, silent
Floyd | space. She stepped on something soft; and walked out of the god's
Floyd | cloak with a smaller cloak of her own: Lurid red silk, threaded with
Floyd | abstract, sinuous lines of gold. It was, technically, the cloak of a
Floyd | high priestess; but it had been dropped to the floor by a novitiate,
Floyd | who had been made to stand in the alcove inside her god's cloak for a
Floyd | ritual. And there, forgotten, the cloak was left for the duration of
Floyd | the ceremony, as the lust and ennui turned to panic when the land
Floyd | began to break.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "oho"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x cloak"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Temple of VelExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CLOAK
Floyd |
Floyd | (the red cloak)
Floyd | Lurid red silk, threaded with abstract, sinuous lines of gold. It was,
Floyd | technically, the cloak of a high priestess; but it had been dropped to
Floyd | the floor by a novitiate, who had been made to stand in the alcove
Floyd | inside her god's cloak for a ritual. And there, forgotten, the cloak
Floyd | was left for the duration of the ceremony, as the lust and ennui
Floyd | turned to panic when the land began to break.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "wear it"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Temple of VelExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > WEAR IT
Floyd |
Floyd | She put on the red cloak.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Roger says, "When the land breaks, it breaks like the wind"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "s"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Tinsmith LaneExits: N, SW, and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > S
Floyd |
Floyd | She fled the suffocating darkness of the temple.
Floyd |
Floyd | Tinsmith Lane
Floyd | Named after the craftsmen who made their dwellings here, though she
Floyd | had only known Tinsmith Lane as a street inhabited by prostitutes and
Floyd | thieves; among the common folk it had a less kind name. But the land's
Floyd | breaking erased such distinctions: the road was barely recognizable.
Floyd | It was a smear of cobblestones in the maelstrom of debris. Breaks in
Floyd | the rubble allowed passage to the southwest, east, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "sw"
Floyd ]  4/12                   Crumbling KitchExits: NE, S, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Crumbling Kitchen
Floyd | The inside was caked with dust and given a yellowing pallor by the
Floyd | sharp light of the sun outside, which flattened the whole room in
Floyd | white. But it seemed mercifully undisturbed. The stairway leading up
Floyd | looked bent, but serviceable. Both the passages to south and northeast
Floyd | remained, though the way to other rooms in the dwelling had crumbled
Floyd | away.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "u"
Floyd ]  4/12                    Cramped QuarteExits: E and D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > U
Floyd |
Floyd | She clambered up the decaying stairs.
Floyd |
Floyd | Cramped Quarters
Floyd | The walls of the upper floor had fallen away, clearing out the
Floyd | constrained space of the tiny quarters above. Even then, this place
Floyd | felt cramped, the bent walls threatening to collapse in on her. What
Floyd | remained of furniture was just mismatched piles of wood and splinters.
Floyd | A staircase led back down. Only one window was left, overlooking a
Floyd | neighbouring roof to the east.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x wood"
Floyd ]  4/12                    Cramped QuarteExits: E and D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X WOOD
Floyd |
Floyd | Much of it had been salvaged for firewood; the rest rotted.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x window"
Floyd ]  4/12                    Cramped QuarteExits: E and D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X WINDOW
Floyd |
Floyd | An arch of dull stone, its curtains long ripped off, its shape
Floyd | distorted by the crumbling of the building.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd | She stepped outside through the window.
Floyd |
Floyd | Sun-baked Roof
Floyd | The dirty mortar that used to cover this flat stone roof had crackled
Floyd | and flaked to dust, leaving only a dirty roof battered by the sun. The
Floyd | house below was half collapsed; the roof drooped menacingly towards
Floyd | one edge. A window led back west.
Floyd |
Floyd | A tent, someone's erstwhile shelter, had collapsed there.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x tent"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TENT
Floyd |
Floyd | Little more than rags and sticks, the fabric for the tent was a scrap
Floyd | of a heavy tapestry. Its occupant could no longer sleep indoors, for
Floyd | fear of buildings collapsing on him; he had cast himself to sea, a day
Floyd | prior, having realised that the building might collapse beneath him.
Floyd | No other sign of him remained.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "enter tent"
Floyd ]  4/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER TENT
Floyd |
Floyd | That was not something she could enter.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "take tent"
Floyd ]  5/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE TENT
Floyd |
Floyd | She pulled at the remains of the tent's fabric, leaving the sticks
Floyd | behind like so much trash. She examined the scrap of fabric: It
Floyd | depicted a devotional scene of the goddess Velê. A supplicant is led
Floyd | to the temple by an... interestingly clad priestess; his walk into it
Floyd | is on the back of prostrate temple-slaves, who would serve as the
Floyd | stepping stones of the temple's reflecting pool. The tapestry was torn
Floyd | just before the point where it gets graphic, however.
Floyd |
Floyd | Beneath the tent, she found a jewelry box.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x box"
Floyd ]  5/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Oval and made of black bronze. It belonged to a lady, who had it
Floyd | stolen from her by a servant in the panic, after social graces had
Floyd | fallen away but before despair had quite set in. The lid was coral,
Floyd | and featured a cameo carving.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x carving"
Floyd ]  6/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CARVING
Floyd |
Floyd | The coral accreted in alternating layers of black and turquoise,
Floyd | allowing a clever artisan to carve contrasting designs in the
Floyd | material, which is then polished to a high sheen. It depicted a lonely
Floyd | rock on the ocean, buffeted by waves, a nude woman standing atop the
Floyd | stone. If one were to turn the box this and that way, depending on the
Floyd | angle, the woman would look either desperate, or defiant. She was
Floyd | Celephais, God of Exile, who cast her name to the sea and took a
Floyd | foreign one.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "open box"
Floyd ]  6/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | She opened the jewelry box, revealing a topaz bracelet.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x bracelet"
Floyd ]  7/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BRACELET
Floyd |
Floyd | Clear, orange-gold crystals of enormous size came from mines in a
Floyd | distant and hostile land far to the southwest. The interlocking
Floyd | trapezoidal stones that surrounded the silver periphery of this
Floyd | bracelet were cuttings from one such stone; on its way to Atlantis, it
Floyd | had broken the back of a slave and killed a mule with its sheer
Floyd | weight. The cuttings were scraps, remains after the enormous original
Floyd | stone was cut into a shape pleasing to its owner.
Floyd |
Floyd | This bracelet had been a lover's gift, and invitation – its recipient
Floyd | laughed, and never wore it, finding it at once gaudy and pedestrian;
Floyd | but the gesture was taken as it was meant, and the two of them were
Floyd | happy, for a time, until the tides had separated all lovers on the
Floyd | island.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "wear it"
Floyd ]  7/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > WEAR IT
Floyd |
Floyd | (first taking the topaz bracelet)
Floyd | She put on the topaz bracelet.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "take box"
Floyd ]  7/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  7/12                     Sun-baked RooExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | She was carrying:
Floyd |   a jewelry box (open but empty)
Floyd |   a topaz bracelet (being worn)
Floyd |   a torn tapestry
Floyd |   a red cloak (being worn)
Floyd |   a raw mirthstone (tied to her sash) (providing light)
Floyd |   the remains of a novitiate's robes (being worn)
Floyd |   a necklace of glass beads (being worn)
Floyd |   an orange and blue sash (being worn)
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "it seems wrong to be wearing treasured objects"
chaudmin says, "but it feels so right"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  7/12                    Cramped QuarteExits: E and D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd | She returned indoors through the window.
Floyd |
Floyd | Cramped Quarters
Floyd | The walls of the upper floor had fallen away, clearing out the
Floyd | constrained space of the tiny quarters above. Even then, this place
Floyd | felt cramped, the bent walls threatening to collapse in on her. What
Floyd | remained of furniture was just mismatched piles of wood and splinters.
Floyd | A staircase led back down. Only one window was left, overlooking a
Floyd | neighbouring roof to the east.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  7/12                   Crumbling KitchExits: NE, S, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd | She clambered down the broken steps.
Floyd |
Floyd | Crumbling Kitchen
Floyd | The inside was caked with dust and given a yellowing pallor by the
Floyd | sharp light of the sun outside, which flattened the whole room in
Floyd | white. But it seemed mercifully undisturbed. The stairway leading up
Floyd | looked bent, but serviceable. Both the passages to south and northeast
Floyd | remained, though the way to other rooms in the dwelling had crumbled
Floyd | away.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "s"
Floyd ]  7/12                   Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > S
Floyd |
Floyd | She stepped outside.
Floyd |
Floyd | Behind a Tenement
Floyd | The tenement, to the north, cast a long shadow over this patio. She
Floyd | could not tell it had been a patio; dirt and dust had overtaken the
Floyd | floor. Rubble and debris surrounded her, though she thought she saw a
Floyd | entrance to the temple of Kózh to the east. Another break in the
Floyd | debris allowed movement back west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Maybe, but you're also saving them from being lost forever."
chaudmin says, "true"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  7/12                     Temple of KózExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd | She slipped into the dark temple through a crumbling archway.
Floyd |
Floyd | Temple of Kózh
Floyd | Kózh, god of slaves, father of chains. The slaves of the Tin Quarter,
Floyd | as well as those destitute enough that they were soon to be slaves,
Floyd | would come to this simple temple to be preached at by the fettered
Floyd | brothers. Officially, the fettered brothers preached obedience, love
Floyd | of one's master, meekness. But there were always whispers – would the
Floyd | slaves really come to this place to hear that? The secret died with
Floyd | the fettered brothers. No light entered the temple from the outside.
Floyd | No pews – slaves were expected to stand. The only exit was west.
Floyd |
Floyd | An altar to the slave-god remained.
Floyd |
Floyd | The walls were covered by a mosaic of rough tiles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Roger says, "like the pirate rat"
DavidW says, "Captain Verdeterre, yes."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x mosaic"
Floyd ]  8/12                     Temple of KózExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MOSAIC
Floyd |
Floyd | It depicted a long line of slaves chained together by their feet, or
Floyd | upon closer inspection a single slave's progression through life. He
Floyd | (She? The figure is stylised, faceless, identityless) waits on their
Floyd | master hand and foot, suffers terrible abuse, and then dies – perhaps
Floyd | of some ailment relating to the removal of their ears, nose, and lips.
Floyd | But then they are reborn in the Basalt Galleries, Kózh's version of
Floyd | the afterlife, where they become slaves of Kózh himself for all
Floyd | eternity. An image of the god dominates that end of the mosaic.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x god"
Floyd ]  9/12                     Temple of KózExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X GOD
Floyd |
Floyd | (the depiction of Kózh)
Floyd | Kózh: Always shown as a gaunt man, his head shorn, his eyes downcast,
Floyd | his body wrapped in chains from which hang the bodies of slaves, tiny
Floyd | and doll-like relative to his godly frame. His mouth was a vacant hole
Floyd | through which shines a permanent grin; Pésazh had taken his lips as
Floyd | punishment for a forgotten crime.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "brutal"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x altar"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Temple of KózExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ALTAR
Floyd |
Floyd | A squat stone block, carved with the same omnipresent chain motif.
Floyd | Deep dark stains covered it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x stains"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Temple of KózExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X STAINS
Floyd |
Floyd | Blood, of course.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "of course"
DavidW says, "Just once, stains ought to be melted chocolate."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x motif"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Temple of KózExits: W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MOTIF
Floyd |
Floyd | Kózh was not known for subtlety.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "pfft"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  10/12                  Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd | She walked out into the sunlight.
Floyd |
Floyd | Behind a Tenement
Floyd | The tenement, to the north, cast a long shadow over this patio. She
Floyd | could not tell it had been a patio; dirt and dust had overtaken the
Floyd | floor. Rubble and debris surrounded her, though she thought she saw a
Floyd | entrance to the temple of Kózh to the east. Another break in the
Floyd | debris allowed movement back west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  10/12                  Across the DebrExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the Debris
Floyd | Here the debris formed a sort of sloping mound, though the broken
Floyd | ruins squeezed that mound into a narrow defile that ran northwest to
Floyd | east.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "nw"
Floyd ]  10/12                     Chanting RowExits: SE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Chanting Row
Floyd | Chanting Row was one of the city's main throughfares. It was wide as
Floyd | four oxcarts abreast, leading from the opulence of the palace quarter
Floyd | all the way to the Eastern Sea Gate. This stretch used to run west to
Floyd | east, straight and true, so much so one could see the sea from this
Floyd | end; but then it had become twisted and broken, surrounded by rubble.
Floyd | The square was to the west. The debris formed a slope that one might
Floyd | climb, to the southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x gate"
Floyd ]  10/12                     Chanting RowExits: SE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X GATE
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Ruined Square
Floyd | Besides the creeping dirt seemingly emerging from between the broken
Floyd | tiles, signs of ruin were around her. The land's breaking has reduced
Floyd | the gilded façades of the shops that surrounded the square to rubble
Floyd | and ashes. Breaks in the surrounding ring of debris were open to the
Floyd | northwest and east.
Floyd |
Floyd | A tide of rising water had blocked access to the northwest.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could also see her makeshift raft here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "oh, so those are the two halves"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x sheets"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SHEETS
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x raft"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RAFT
Floyd |
Floyd | Made of reclaimed wood. Buoyant cheap timber used for doors in the
Floyd | poor quarter. The mast was hardwood she recovered from the dining
Floyd | table of some Dúc, whose wife unwittingly gave up her silk sheets for
Floyd | her sails.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x sails"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SAILS
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "score"
Floyd ]  10/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SCORE
Floyd |
Floyd | [You have seen 10 out of 12 stories of Atlantis. You have not
Floyd | closely examined: the entrance to the temple of Kózh and the depiction
Floyd | of Celephais.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "time to go back then"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  10/12                     Chanting RowExits: SE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Chanting Row
Floyd | Chanting Row was one of the city's main throughfares. It was wide as
Floyd | four oxcarts abreast, leading from the opulence of the palace quarter
Floyd | all the way to the Eastern Sea Gate. This stretch used to run west to
Floyd | east, straight and true, so much so one could see the sea from this
Floyd | end; but then it had become twisted and broken, surrounded by rubble.
Floyd | The square was to the west. The debris formed a slope that one might
Floyd | climb, to the southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "se"
Floyd ]  10/12                  Across the DebrExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the Debris
Floyd | Here the debris formed a sort of sloping mound, though the broken
Floyd | ruins squeezed that mound into a narrow defile that ran northwest to
Floyd | east.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  10/12                  Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Behind a Tenement
Floyd | The tenement, to the north, cast a long shadow over this patio. She
Floyd | could not tell it had been a patio; dirt and dust had overtaken the
Floyd | floor. Rubble and debris surrounded her, though she thought she saw a
Floyd | entrance to the temple of Kózh to the east. Another break in the
Floyd | debris allowed movement back west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x entrance"
Floyd ]  11/12                  Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ENTRANCE
Floyd |
Floyd | On closer inspection, the carved columns showed the unmistakable motif
Floyd | of Kózh, god of slaves. Made of orichalcum (distinctive among the
Floyd | granite that formed most of the rubble in this district), they were
Floyd | carved to look wrapped in chains. Together, they formed an archway,
Floyd | though the arch had crumbled; the interior of the temple itself was
Floyd | dark.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x box"
Floyd ]  11/12                  Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Oval and made of black bronze. It belonged to a lady, who had it
Floyd | stolen from her by a servant in the panic, after social graces had
Floyd | fallen away but before despair had quite set in. The lid was coral,
Floyd | and featured a cameo carving.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x carving"
Floyd ]  11/12                  Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CARVING
Floyd |
Floyd | The coral accreted in alternating layers of black and turquoise,
Floyd | allowing a clever artisan to carve contrasting designs in the
Floyd | material, which is then polished to a high sheen. It depicted a lonely
Floyd | rock on the ocean, buffeted by waves, a nude woman standing atop the
Floyd | stone. If one were to turn the box this and that way, depending on the
Floyd | angle, the woman would look either desperate, or defiant. She was
Floyd | Celephais, God of Exile, who cast her name to the sea and took a
Floyd | foreign one.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x celephais"
Floyd ]  12/12                  Behind a TenemeExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CELEPHAIS
Floyd |
Floyd | She was emaciated and hateful, or frail and wronged. She was a victim,
Floyd | or a perpetrator. There were crimes. She was impure. Precious little
Floyd | more was known to Atlantis' people: her worship was a crime. Her
Floyd | followers were cast into the sea, exiled to the deep. The ladies who
Floyd | had her effigy on their dressers were at times traitors, at times
Floyd | dilettantes. The box had been a symbol of hushed rebellion, youthful
Floyd | defiance, affluent irony. And then it was used by a survivor to store
Floyd | the last of his food, for three days, until he threw himself to the
Floyd | sea.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "success"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  12/12                  Across the DebrExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Across the Debris
Floyd | Here the debris formed a sort of sloping mound, though the broken
Floyd | ruins squeezed that mound into a narrow defile that ran northwest to
Floyd | east.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "yes"
Fang arrives, full of funk, but no fun.
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "nw"
Floyd ]  12/12                     Chanting RowExits: SE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Chanting Row
Floyd | Chanting Row was one of the city's main throughfares. It was wide as
Floyd | four oxcarts abreast, leading from the opulence of the palace quarter
Floyd | all the way to the Eastern Sea Gate. This stretch used to run west to
Floyd | east, straight and true, so much so one could see the sea from this
Floyd | end; but then it had become twisted and broken, surrounded by rubble.
Floyd | The square was to the west. The debris formed a slope that one might
Floyd | climb, to the southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  12/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Ruined Square
Floyd | Besides the creeping dirt seemingly emerging from between the broken
Floyd | tiles, signs of ruin were around her. The land's breaking has reduced
Floyd | the gilded façades of the shops that surrounded the square to rubble
Floyd | and ashes. Breaks in the surrounding ring of debris were open to the
Floyd | northwest and east.
Floyd |
Floyd | A tide of rising water had blocked access to the northwest.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could also see her makeshift raft here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "time to sail"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "enter raft"
Floyd ]  12/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER RAFT
Floyd |
Floyd | [You have seen all 12 stories of Atlantis.]
Floyd |
Floyd | This will end the story. Are you sure?
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "y"
Floyd ]  12/12                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | This will end the story. Are you sure?
Floyd | > Y
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | She had found as much as she could of the world she was leaving
Floyd | behind. She carried a small history with her away from that place, but
Floyd | could not tell if that history deserved to survive; if it should be
Floyd | told. Still, she climbed onto her raft, with the trinkets and memories
Floyd | she could take, and waited for the water to rise and take her away, a
Floyd | small reminder of a dead world floating in an Atlantic current.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |     *** little remained from the fall of Atlantis ***
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to RESTART, RESTORE a saved game, QUIT, or UNDO the
Floyd | last command?
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "yeah, that history seems pretty bleak"
DavidW says, "well, you explored the poor part of town. The other branch is where the richer folk lived."
chaudmin asks, "play again?"
Roger says, "The lost city of Atlanta is sort of inherently tragic"
DavidW says, "I'm not sure why the author wants people to only play the game once and not allow contrast and comparison."
DavidW says, "I think I would like to play again, yes. I never saw the other half."
chaudmin says, "I've got cousins in Atlanta"
chaudmin says, "seems like a nice place"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "restart"
Floyd ]
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to restore a saved game?
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd | Would you like to restore a saved game?
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | When the Land Goes Under the Water is a purely exploratory piece. The
Floyd | only verbs that are strictly necessary are GO, EXAMINE, LOOK, TAKE,
Floyd | INVENTORY, and SCORE. Others may be implemented. If you intend to
Floyd | write a review or discuss it with others, I suggest you play through
Floyd | it exactly once. For more detailed information, type ABOUT.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
chaudmin pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]
Floyd | She awoke when the sun's glare reached her face, dancing in between
Floyd | the flapping of her sails.
Floyd |
Floyd | When the Land Goes Under the Water
Floyd | a walk among the ashes by Nikephoros De Kloet
Floyd | Release 1 / Serial number 150505 / Inform 7 build 6L38 (I6/v6.33 lib
Floyd | 6/12N)
Floyd |
Floyd | Ruined Square
Floyd | As a girl, she was told that orichalcum was unbreakable; that the
Floyd | green-gold tiles on the floor of the great old Kormákozh Square would
Floyd | outlast and outlive her. Besides the creeping dirt seemingly emerging
Floyd | from between the broken tiles, signs of ruin were around her. The
Floyd | land's breaking has reduced the gilded façades of the shops that
Floyd | surrounded the square to rubble and ashes. Breaks in the surrounding
Floyd | ring of debris were open to the northwest and east.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could see her makeshift raft here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "We are rebels today."
DavidW says, "Hope the author forgives us this trespass."
Roger says, "The author retracted and regrets the directive, I seem to recall from the postmortem"
DavidW asks (of Roger), "oh?"
DavidW says, "Okay. That makes me feel better, actually."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x raft"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X RAFT
Floyd |
Floyd | Made of reclaimed wood. Buoyant cheap timber used for doors in the
Floyd | poor quarter. The mast was hardwood she recovered from the dining
Floyd | table of some Dúc, whose wife unwittingly gave up her silk sheets for
Floyd | her sails.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "nw"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Gilded Lane
Floyd | Gilded Lane had been paved with gold, and when gold proved too soft,
Floyd | it was paved with orichalcum. But then, orichalcum proved too soft,
Floyd | too. She saw a mess of green-gold tiles, stopped mid-spin, where the
Floyd | street used to be. All around her were the husks of crumbled
Floyd | buildings, like the limbs of buried giants breaking through the
Floyd | ground. The maw of a tunnel opened up to the southwest; the square was
Floyd | back southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x tiles"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TILES
Floyd |
Floyd | A sinkhole had begun, but not quite opened, in the middle of the road,
Floyd | collapsing into a cracked pucker of broken tiles, half-buried in dirt.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x orichalcum"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ORICHALCUM
Floyd |
Floyd | A sinkhole had begun, but not quite opened, in the middle of the road,
Floyd | collapsing into a cracked pucker of broken tiles, half-buried in dirt.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "hold on. We seem to have lost our status line."
chaudmin says, "yeah"
DavidW says, "Somehow, 'restart' lost it."
chaudmin says, "whoops"
DavidW says, "We might need to quit and load again, I think."
DavidW asks, "Is that okay?"
chaudmin says, "sure"
DavidW says (to Floyd), "quit"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > QUIT
Floyd |
Floyd | Are you sure you want to quit?
DavidW says (to Floyd), "yes"
Floyd | Are you sure you want to quit?
Floyd | > YES
Floyd | cheapglulxe quit with exit status: 0
Floyd asks, "That game over already? It was just getting good. Wanna play another?"
DavidW says (to Floyd), "load sleepmask whentheland"
Floyd ]
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to restore a saved game?
DavidW says (to Floyd), "no"
Floyd | Would you like to restore a saved game?
Floyd | > NO
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | When the Land Goes Under the Water is a purely exploratory piece. The
Floyd | only verbs that are strictly necessary are GO, EXAMINE, LOOK, TAKE,
Floyd | INVENTORY, and SCORE. Others may be implemented. If you intend to
Floyd | write a review or discuss it with others, I suggest you play through
Floyd | it exactly once. For more detailed information, type ABOUT.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
DavidW pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]
Floyd | She awoke when the sun's glare reached her face, dancing in between
Floyd | the flapping of her sails.
Floyd |
Floyd | When the Land Goes Under the Water
Floyd | a walk among the ashes by Nikephoros De Kloet
Floyd | Release 1 / Serial number 150505 / Inform 7 build 6L38 (I6/v6.33 lib
Floyd | 6/12N)
Floyd |
Floyd | Ruined Square
Floyd | As a girl, she was told that orichalcum was unbreakable; that the
Floyd | green-gold tiles on the floor of the great old Kormákozh Square would
Floyd | outlast and outlive her. Besides the creeping dirt seemingly emerging
Floyd | from between the broken tiles, signs of ruin were around her. The
Floyd | land's breaking has reduced the gilded façades of the shops that
Floyd | surrounded the square to rubble and ashes. Breaks in the surrounding
Floyd | ring of debris were open to the northwest and east.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could see her makeshift raft here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "i"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | She was carrying:
Floyd |   the remains of a novitiate's robes (being worn)
Floyd |   a necklace of glass beads (being worn)
Floyd |   an orange and blue sash (being worn)
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "huh. It's just gone."
chaudmin says, "just like atlantis"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x robes"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ROBES
Floyd |
Floyd | Little more than rags, the robes used to mark her as a novitiate of
Floyd | the god Imbelá. Their brilliant white was matted with countless stains
Floyd | – blood, and ashes, and more.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I wonder if winning the other way somehow saved a file that the game reads to somehow...? Weird."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x necklace"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X NECKLACE
Floyd |
Floyd | Each one was perfectly clear, but for a dot of black glass inside
Floyd | them; a reminder of impurity. She thought that it was the day she was
Floyd | supposed to return them to the temple, and take her priest's necklace
Floyd | of pure, clear beads.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x sash"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SASH
Floyd |
Floyd | Her family colours, in the silk of the eyeworm that was reserved for
Floyd | the noble houses. Unlike her robes, they refused to fade or stain –
Floyd | how odd that this miraculous fabric was exclusive to those whose
Floyd | clothes were never soiled.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "nw"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NW
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Gilded Lane
Floyd | Gilded Lane had been paved with gold, and when gold proved too soft,
Floyd | it was paved with orichalcum. But then, orichalcum proved too soft,
Floyd | too. She saw a mess of green-gold tiles, stopped mid-spin, where the
Floyd | street used to be. All around her were the husks of crumbled
Floyd | buildings, like the limbs of buried giants breaking through the
Floyd | ground. The maw of a tunnel opened up to the southwest; the square was
Floyd | back southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "exits"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > EXITS
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognise.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x tiles"
Floyd ]
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TILES
Floyd |
Floyd | A sinkhole had begun, but not quite opened, in the middle of the road,
Floyd | collapsing into a cracked pucker of broken tiles, half-buried in dirt.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Darn. An exits command would help when the status line is missing."
chaudmin says, "we must rely on our memory"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "sw"
Floyd ]  0/13                     Twisted TunneExits: NE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SW
Floyd |
Floyd | She descended into the tunnel below.
Floyd |
Floyd | Twisted Tunnel
Floyd | The land had contorted this section of street into a spiraling vortex
Floyd | of cobblestones and dirt, dead grass poking incongruously from the
Floyd | helical ceiling. The passage ran northeast and west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x ceiling"
Floyd ]  0/13                     Twisted TunneExits: NE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CEILING
Floyd |
Floyd | Like a great rolling ocean wave, stopped just before the break.
Floyd | Cobblestones and tiles flecked with gold, dirt and grasses, dead
Floyd | flowers, all were caught in the movement of the dried, cracked earth;
Floyd | some hung overhead like curious, inverted vines.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x tunnel"
Floyd ]  0/13                     Twisted TunneExits: NE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TUNNEL
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  0/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd | She emerged from the tunnel.
Floyd |
Floyd | Overgrown Garden
Floyd | This had been a formal garden, a gathering place for aristocrats. But
Floyd | she found within it only a dried fountain, and a lawn that had become
Floyd | overgrown with grass. The grass, in turn, was a matted patch of drying
Floyd | hay, caked with dust and ash, waiting to catch fire in the constant
Floyd | sun. A breach in the land was still open to the east; to the north,
Floyd | she could see a jagged passage into the remains of a palace.
Floyd |
Floyd | The fountain was long drained of water, but it still stood.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oh, I was too slow."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x tunnel"
Floyd ]  0/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TUNNEL
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "no, I wanted to examine the tunnel two rooms ago."
DavidW says, "Don't worry about it."
chaudmin says, "wait a minute, the status line is back"
DavidW says, "I also ... huh, you're right."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x grass"
Floyd ]  0/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X GRASS
Floyd |
Floyd | Dead or dying, whitening at the edges, as though they turned to salt
Floyd | in the harsh air.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x fountain"
Floyd ]  0/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FOUNTAIN
Floyd |
Floyd | A simple square of grey stone. It had been cunningly designed so that
Floyd | the water would come at the top of the fountain in spurts, creating
Floyd | roiling waves on its surface. The artisan who designed it had been
Floyd | exiled from Atlantis, so that he could never craft a similar wonder
Floyd | for another noble house. Its bottom was a mosaic of Lonkê, god of the
Floyd | ocean.
Floyd |
Floyd | Half-hidden among the mosaic tiles was an obol.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "okay, it must be a feature of the game, then, to make the line go away until we're through the tunnel."
chaudmin says, "Lonk"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x mosaic"
Floyd ]  0/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MOSAIC
Floyd |
Floyd | Lonkê was a foreign god, a deity who washed upon the shore of Atlantis
Floyd | for a distant land. He had the upper body of a man, the lower body of
Floyd | a shark, and the head of a moray eel, which in the fine mosaic would
Floyd | sinuously peer at the viewer through the water. Pésazh had taken his
Floyd | left hand as a punishment for his hubris – that effigy showed it
Floyd | replaced with a jagged harpoon tip.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "That chief god dude sure likes to take away body parts from the other gods. Must be a fetish of his."
chaudmin says, "maybe he's collecting parts to create his own god"
chaudmin says, "a la frankenstein"
DavidW says, "He took the prostitute goddess's nose, the slave god's lips, this one's left hand."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x obol"
Floyd ]  1/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X OBOL
Floyd |
Floyd | A heptagonal token made of steel, with a border in orichalcum. One
Floyd | side depicted an eye; the other side, a right hand. The god Pésazh
Floyd | collected a toll on the dead, taking from them parts of their body as
Floyd | repayment for their sins; these coins were struck as surrogate
Floyd | offerings, so that the wealthy dead could remain whole in the
Floyd | hereafter. Symbolically, this one was struck for a man of envy (the
Floyd | eye) and greed (the hand); he did not get a chance to be buried with
Floyd | it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "there he goes again, taking body parts"
DavidW says, "wow. Psazh preys on the dead too."
DavidW says, "Take the obol."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "take it"
Floyd ]  1/13                    Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE IT
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "If we find his temple, this thing might let us escape whole."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  1/13                      Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd | She walked through a passage into the remains of a palace.
Floyd |
Floyd | Half a Foyer
Floyd | This rich foyer had been floored with brilliant marble tiles and
Floyd | draped with silks. One of the grand columns along its side had
Floyd | toppled, preventing movement into most of the palace complex. Holes in
Floyd | the wall – hard to tell if they had been intentional passages – led
Floyd | north and south, outside. A hidden door in the west had become a
Floyd | jagged hole. And a collapsed staircase still allowed an unsteady climb
Floyd | to an upstairs room.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x silks"
Floyd ]  1/13                      Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SILKS
Floyd |
Floyd | Little remained; jagged strands flapping in the twisting wind,
Floyd | goldenrod speckled with dirty white.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x tiles"
Floyd ]  1/13                      Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TILES
Floyd |
Floyd | Pristine marble from the east, each tile individually carved into the
Floyd | likeness of a condemned man. The villa had belonged to a magistrate,
Floyd | who made his guests walk on the faces of the men he had sentenced to
Floyd | death or exile. She found their broken visages littering the floor,
Floyd | crunching under her steps.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "ew"
chaudmin says, "brutal"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "u"
Floyd ]  1/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > U
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Looted Apartments
Floyd | It was just barely perceptible that at the top of the stairs, passages
Floyd | would splay out in all directions, leading into various wings of the
Floyd | palace. Most of them were gone, as was the palace's roof, ripped away.
Floyd | All that remained of the upper floor of the villa was a curious island
Floyd | of orichalcum-flecked ceramic tiles, cracking in the sunlight. Even
Floyd | then, this little patch of opulence had been ransacked, more than
Floyd | once, by various desperate bands – and later, desperate individuals.
Floyd |
Floyd | A pile of ash, the remains of a campfire, marred the tiles on the
Floyd | floor.
Floyd |
Floyd | The only furniture that remained was a lectern made of gold, rendered
Floyd | worthless by the calamity.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could also see a tarnished lantern here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Atlantis is a lot less fun than I thought."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x ash"
Floyd ]  2/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ASH
Floyd |
Floyd | (the pile of ash)
Floyd | The grey-black ash betrayed scrolls and furniture; someone's attempt
Floyd | at staving off the wind and cold of the nights, the roaming feral
Floyd | dogs, the hunger. For four days and four nights they were tended by a
Floyd | desperate man, a lesser servant whose master chose to leave behind.
Floyd | Until he went out into the ruins to seek food, and did not return.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x lectern"
Floyd ]  3/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LECTERN
Floyd |
Floyd | As it could not be eaten or burned, it was left alone as its
Floyd | companions were ransacked, a silent witness to the chaos. Its base is
Floyd | sculpted into a vaguely human shape, a stylised depiction of the
Floyd | slave-god, Kózh. But its surface rarely held scrolls; the master of
Floyd | this manor had used it more as a pillory.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x god"
Floyd ]  3/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X GOD
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x depiction"
Floyd ]  3/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DEPICTION
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Whipped the slaves over this thing, I guess."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x lantern"
Floyd ]  4/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LANTERN
Floyd |
Floyd | A cage of silver, blackening at the edges. Inside, ensconced safely
Floyd | from errant fingers, is an illuminated mirthstone, a facet-cut piece
Floyd | of hell. The silver lantern is shaped into an angular, polyhedral form
Floyd | that makes it uncomfortable to hold, though the stone emits no heat.
Floyd | Instead, one holds it by a leaden hoop attached to the top.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x kazh"
Floyd ]  4/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X KAZH
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "take lantern"
Floyd ]  4/13                   Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE LANTERN
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  4/13                      Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Half a Foyer
Floyd | This rich foyer had been floored with brilliant marble tiles and
Floyd | draped with silks. One of the grand columns along its side had
Floyd | toppled, preventing movement into most of the palace complex. Holes in
Floyd | the wall – hard to tell if they had been intentional passages – led
Floyd | north and south, outside. A hidden door in the west had become a
Floyd | jagged hole. And a collapsed staircase still allowed an unsteady climb
Floyd | to an upstairs room.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  4/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Servants' Quarters
Floyd | Most walls had crumbled into impenetrable piles of rubble; all she
Floyd | found in this wing of the palace was a shaded, closet-sized room. The
Floyd | plaster on the walls had cracked into spiderwebs of grey-white flakes,
Floyd | showing the smooth stone beneath. Though once this wing of the palace
Floyd | had been a maze of passages, the rubble and damage meant she could
Floyd | only exit to the east, west, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | Most furniture had become firewood, but she could see the collapsed
Floyd | remains of a bed.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x bed"
Floyd ]  4/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BED
Floyd |
Floyd | A pile of dirty hay on a pile of rotting wood.
Floyd |
Floyd | A speck of grey was visible among the hay, some kind of token or
Floyd | amulet made of iron.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x token"
Floyd ]  4/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TOKEN
Floyd |
Floyd | (the obol)
Floyd | A heptagonal token made of steel, with a border in orichalcum. One
Floyd | side depicted an eye; the other side, a right hand. The god Pésazh
Floyd | collected a toll on the dead, taking from them parts of their body as
Floyd | repayment for their sins; these coins were struck as surrogate
Floyd | offerings, so that the wealthy dead could remain whole in the
Floyd | hereafter. Symbolically, this one was struck for a man of envy (the
Floyd | eye) and greed (the hand); he did not get a chance to be buried with
Floyd | it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "no the other token"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x iron"
Floyd ]  5/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X IRON
Floyd |
Floyd | Cast as a profile cameo of the god Azh. It was rusted around the
Floyd | edges. The amulet was a chambermaid's, a symbol of something she
Floyd | yearned for as she prepared for a life regimented by the path her
Floyd | masters had set before her.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "take it"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "take it"
Floyd ]  5/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE IT
Floyd |
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  5/13                      Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Half a Foyer
Floyd | This rich foyer had been floored with brilliant marble tiles and
Floyd | draped with silks. One of the grand columns along its side had
Floyd | toppled, preventing movement into most of the palace complex. Holes in
Floyd | the wall – hard to tell if they had been intentional passages – led
Floyd | north and south, outside. A hidden door in the west had become a
Floyd | jagged hole. And a collapsed staircase still allowed an unsteady climb
Floyd | to an upstairs room.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  5/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Servants' Quarters
Floyd | Most walls had crumbled into impenetrable piles of rubble; all she
Floyd | found in this wing of the palace was a shaded, closet-sized room. The
Floyd | plaster on the walls had cracked into spiderwebs of grey-white flakes,
Floyd | showing the smooth stone beneath. Though once this wing of the palace
Floyd | had been a maze of passages, the rubble and damage meant she could
Floyd | only exit to the east, west, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | Most furniture had become firewood, but she could see the collapsed
Floyd | remains of a bed.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "wrong way"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  5/13                    Argentine ArcaExits: E and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd | She left the palace through a side door.
Floyd |
Floyd | Argentine Arcade
Floyd | One of the Palace Quarter's particular jewels was, upon a time, a long
Floyd | promenade flanked on both sides by spindly columns of pure silver,
Floyd | carved to resemble the ghost ash trees that used to blanket the
Floyd | island. This patch of the street endured, for a time; though the
Floyd | street rose sharply to the north and south, as though the whole
Floyd | wayfare was peeling off the earth at its ends. The back entrance of a
Floyd | grand villa was east; to the west, a temple remained.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Not going west or north of Servants' Qs?"
DavidW says, "oh, you probably typed e by accident"
chaudmin says, "yeah. confused my directions"
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x temple"
Floyd ]  5/13                    Argentine ArcaExits: E and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TEMPLE
Floyd |
Floyd | All but unrecognisable – soot had covered the pristine white façade.
Floyd | Imbelá's temple was unadorned on the outside; its simple entrance
Floyd | somehow endured, to the west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "w"
Floyd ]  5/13                    Temple of ImbeExits: E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > W
Floyd |
Floyd | She stepped into a familiar, broken temple.
Floyd |
Floyd | Temple of Imbelá
Floyd | Imbelá, god of purity. Here the first daughters of noble families
Floyd | would come to be preached at by third and fourth daughters who had
Floyd | been promised to the temple as initiates. It was their virtue and
Floyd | purity, they were told, that sustained Atlantis. When the land
Floyd | cracked, blame was put upon all daughters of the great houses; blood
Floyd | was spilled over perceived slights against the gods.
Floyd |
Floyd | Though it had toppled to the ground, Imbelá's heavy stone effigy still
Floyd | seemed to judge her.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x effigy"
Floyd ]  6/13                    Temple of ImbeExits: E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X EFFIGY
Floyd |
Floyd | Imbelá, whose statue was made of simple soapstone, whose head was
Floyd | depicted as a featureless orb because she gave all her features to the
Floyd | god Pésazh to atone for her temptations. The god of purity, who had
Floyd | judged the novitiate's every step, like others before her. Even from
Floyd | the ground, it still seemed to judge and weigh her heart.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "push it"
Floyd ]  6/13                    Temple of ImbeExits: E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUSH IT
Floyd |
Floyd | It was fixed in place.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "not much here"
DavidW says, "I guess."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  6/13                    Argentine ArcaExits: E and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd | She returned to the sunlight outside.
Floyd |
Floyd | Argentine Arcade
Floyd | One of the Palace Quarter's particular jewels was, upon a time, a long
Floyd | promenade flanked on both sides by spindly columns of pure silver,
Floyd | carved to resemble the ghost ash trees that used to blanket the
Floyd | island. This patch of the street endured, for a time; though the
Floyd | street rose sharply to the north and south, as though the whole
Floyd | wayfare was peeling off the earth at its ends. The back entrance of a
Floyd | grand villa was east; to the west, a temple remained.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x columns"
Floyd ]  6/13                    Argentine ArcaExits: E and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X COLUMNS
Floyd |
Floyd | They had some how become twisted, like the limbs of dying trees,
Floyd | looming over the street in a diseased, tarnished way.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "It's odd how purity is represented by absence and austerity."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  6/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Servants' Quarters
Floyd | Most walls had crumbled into impenetrable piles of rubble; all she
Floyd | found in this wing of the palace was a shaded, closet-sized room. The
Floyd | plaster on the walls had cracked into spiderwebs of grey-white flakes,
Floyd | showing the smooth stone beneath. Though once this wing of the palace
Floyd | had been a maze of passages, the rubble and damage meant she could
Floyd | only exit to the east, west, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | Most furniture had become firewood, but she could see the collapsed
Floyd | remains of a bed.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  6/13                     Palace ArmoryExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Palace Armory
Floyd | The weapons to fight Atlantis' enemies would be stored in armories
Floyd | like these, each noble house fielding its own gleaming-armoured
Floyd | soldier-slaves. When an enemy came that could not be fought off with
Floyd | weapons, their arms spilled out onto the streets. The armory seemed
Floyd | empty for its size, an arched stone gallery meant to supply a hundred
Floyd | fighting men. A passage led back south.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could see a broken spear here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x spear"
Floyd ]  7/13                     Palace ArmoryExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X SPEAR
Floyd |
Floyd | (the broken spear)
Floyd | The weaponry of Atlantis comes in two classes: The vast bronze
Floyd | behemoths that stride over the ocean to bring fear and awe to the
Floyd | colonies to the east and west; and the arms of palace guards, the
Floyd | tools of enforcing order. This spear was the latter; stout and
Floyd | weighted, it was made as much to beat as to pierce, punishment as much
Floyd | as weapon. The ebony haft had been broken in half, perhaps an
Floyd | ill-thought strike. The spear point had a curious shape.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x point"
Floyd ]  8/13                     Palace ArmoryExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X POINT
Floyd |
Floyd | Shaped like the body of a squid, eight arms joined together into a
Floyd | barbed point, two arms outstretched like the spars on a boar spear. A
Floyd | bright bronze alloy polished to an imitation-gold sheen, two beady
Floyd | eyes inset with onyx. Part of a set of dozens, all of which would
Floyd | eventually be swallowed by the earth. All, but this one.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "take spear"
Floyd ]  8/13                     Palace ArmoryExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE SPEAR
Floyd |
Floyd | (the broken spear)
Floyd | Taken.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x haft"
Floyd ]  8/13                     Palace ArmoryExits: S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X HAFT
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "s"
Floyd ]  8/13                   Servants' QuartExits: N, E, and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > S
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Servants' Quarters
Floyd | Most walls had crumbled into impenetrable piles of rubble; all she
Floyd | found in this wing of the palace was a shaded, closet-sized room. The
Floyd | plaster on the walls had cracked into spiderwebs of grey-white flakes,
Floyd | showing the smooth stone beneath. Though once this wing of the palace
Floyd | had been a maze of passages, the rubble and damage meant she could
Floyd | only exit to the east, west, and north.
Floyd |
Floyd | Most furniture had become firewood, but she could see the collapsed
Floyd | remains of a bed.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  8/13                      Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Half a Foyer
Floyd | This rich foyer had been floored with brilliant marble tiles and
Floyd | draped with silks. One of the grand columns along its side had
Floyd | toppled, preventing movement into most of the palace complex. Holes in
Floyd | the wall – hard to tell if they had been intentional passages – led
Floyd | north and south, outside. A hidden door in the west had become a
Floyd | jagged hole. And a collapsed staircase still allowed an unsteady climb
Floyd | to an upstairs room.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  8/13                     Palace QuarteExits: NW and S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd | She found herself leaving the palace for the remains of the western
Floyd | quarter.
Floyd |
Floyd | Palace Quarter
Floyd | The Palace Quarter did not so much have streets as extremely long
Floyd | plazas, promenades flanked by rows of gilded fountains that would
Floyd | stretch on towards the horizon. It had no alleys – servants and
Floyd | slaves
Floyd | would instead scurry between palaces and villas in tunnels beneath the
Floyd | earth, out of the sight of the nobility. The tunnels had burst into
Floyd | the surface when the land broke, cracking open the meticulously tiled
Floyd | squares, isolating each villa into an island. She found herself in an
Floyd | oddly preserved stretch of the quarter, surrounded mostly by unnatural
Floyd | chasms, connecting buildings to the south and northwest.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x fountains"
Floyd ]  8/13                     Palace QuarteExits: NW and S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FOUNTAINS
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x chasms"
Floyd ]  8/13                     Palace QuarteExits: NW and S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CHASMS
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "nw"
Floyd ]  8/13                    Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NW
Floyd |
Floyd | She wandered into a dark temple.
Floyd |
Floyd | Temple of Pésazh
Floyd | Pésazh, king-god, father of god-kings. All that remained was a
Floyd | fraction of his temple complex, a windowless antechamber that lingered
Floyd | after the earth swallowed the rest of the temple. Sunlight filtered in
Floyd | from the southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | A wooden altar, used for preliminary prayers, still survived in the
Floyd | antechamber.
Floyd |
Floyd | The god's stern visage stared north into a temple hall that was no
Floyd | longer there.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x altar"
Floyd ]  9/13                    Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ALTAR
Floyd |
Floyd | The altar was a softly curving parabola of wood, supported on legs of
Floyd | gold, upon which offerings would be laid. And as the stern god's
Floyd | chastisement of his pantheon sustained the world, so did symbols of
Floyd | his justice – almonds for eyes, ginger for hands, carrots for noses
Floyd | –
Floyd | become burnt offerings to him. And on bad years, the symbols would be
Floyd | altogether more direct.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x visage"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X VISAGE
Floyd |
Floyd | Pésazh was tall and severe, cast in a statue of white gold. He was the
Floyd | namer of sins, and as such, he was the only whole god; every other
Floyd | deity had given something of themselves as punishment, when the
Floyd | god-father identified their crime. He was wrapped in fine cloth and
Floyd | burdened by a heavy crown, his bearded face almost hidden under the
Floyd | finery.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x crown"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CROWN
Floyd |
Floyd | Cast in traditional black bronze, the crown resembled a bulbous limb
Floyd | of a baobab tree that deigned to twist itself upon the god's head.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x cloth"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CLOTH
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "take it"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TAKE IT
Floyd |
Floyd | That seemed to be a part of the effigy of Pésazh.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "n"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > N
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't go that way.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x beard"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X BEARD
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "hm. We've missed three things, but I'm not sure what or where."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "score"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SCORE
Floyd |
Floyd | [You have seen 10 out of 13 stories of Atlantis. You have not
Floyd | closely examined: the depiction of Azh, the depiction of Kózh, and the
Floyd | cut mirthstone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x lantern"
Floyd ]  10/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LANTERN
Floyd |
Floyd | A cage of silver, blackening at the edges. Inside, ensconced safely
Floyd | from errant fingers, is an illuminated mirthstone, a facet-cut piece
Floyd | of hell. The silver lantern is shaped into an angular, polyhedral form
Floyd | that makes it uncomfortable to hold, though the stone emits no heat.
Floyd | Instead, one holds it by a leaden hoop attached to the top.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x mirthstone"
Floyd ]  11/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X MIRTHSTONE
Floyd |
Floyd | Mirthstone is almost always clumsily cut; the hazards of working with
Floyd | the material prevent anyone from accruing enough experience to become
Floyd | a true master. The artisan who made this one lived longer than most,
Floyd | and his family was compensated well for this beautifully cut piece;
Floyd | with its impurities severed, the faceted sliver inside shines with a
Floyd | harsh white light.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "It's probably radium, or some other radioactive element."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x amulet"
Floyd ]  11/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X AMULET
Floyd |
Floyd | Cast as a profile cameo of the god Azh. It was rusted around the
Floyd | edges. The amulet was a chambermaid's, a symbol of something she
Floyd | yearned for as she prepared for a life regimented by the path her
Floyd | masters had set before her.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x azh"
Floyd ]  12/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X AZH
Floyd |
Floyd | Pésazh had plucked out the blind god's eyes for the crime of misplaced
Floyd | compassion; of tempting the poor with abundance. The iron amulet
Floyd | depicted Azh with the unmistakable hollow eyes. And thus the
Floyd | compassionate god had learned the proper place of compassion; that it
Floyd | should be measured, just so, that no-one thinks to rise above their
Floyd | station. Such tokens were reminders of the order of things – as much
Floyd | as they were promises of prosperity, or at least subsistence.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x kozh"
Floyd ]  12/13                   Temple of PésaExits: SE
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X KOZH
Floyd |
Floyd | She couldn't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "se"
Floyd ]  12/13                    Palace QuarteExits: NW and S
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Palace Quarter
Floyd | The Palace Quarter did not so much have streets as extremely long
Floyd | plazas, promenades flanked by rows of gilded fountains that would
Floyd | stretch on towards the horizon. It had no alleys – servants and
Floyd | slaves
Floyd | would instead scurry between palaces and villas in tunnels beneath the
Floyd | earth, out of the sight of the nobility. The tunnels had burst into
Floyd | the surface when the land broke, cracking open the meticulously tiled
Floyd | squares, isolating each villa into an island. She found herself in an
Floyd | oddly preserved stretch of the quarter, surrounded mostly by unnatural
Floyd | chasms, connecting buildings to the south and northwest.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "s"
Floyd ]  12/13                     Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > S
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Half a Foyer
Floyd | This rich foyer had been floored with brilliant marble tiles and
Floyd | draped with silks. One of the grand columns along its side had
Floyd | toppled, preventing movement into most of the palace complex. Holes in
Floyd | the wall – hard to tell if they had been intentional passages – led
Floyd | north and south, outside. A hidden door in the west had become a
Floyd | jagged hole. And a collapsed staircase still allowed an unsteady climb
Floyd | to an upstairs room.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "u"
Floyd ]  12/13                  Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > U
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Looted Apartments
Floyd | It was just barely perceptible that at the top of the stairs, passages
Floyd | would splay out in all directions, leading into various wings of the
Floyd | palace. Most of them were gone, as was the palace's roof, ripped away.
Floyd | All that remained of the upper floor of the villa was a curious island
Floyd | of orichalcum-flecked ceramic tiles, cracking in the sunlight. Even
Floyd | then, this little patch of opulence had been ransacked, more than
Floyd | once, by various desperate bands – and later, desperate individuals.
Floyd |
Floyd | A pile of ash, the remains of a campfire, marred the tiles on the
Floyd | floor.
Floyd |
Floyd | The only furniture that remained was a lectern made of gold, rendered
Floyd | worthless by the calamity.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x lectern"
Floyd ]  12/13                  Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X LECTERN
Floyd |
Floyd | As it could not be eaten or burned, it was left alone as its
Floyd | companions were ransacked, a silent witness to the chaos. Its base is
Floyd | sculpted into a vaguely human shape, a stylised depiction of the
Floyd | slave-god, Kózh. But its surface rarely held scrolls; the master of
Floyd | this manor had used it more as a pillory.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oh right, Kozh is on the lectern."
chaudmin says, "had to read back through the transcript"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x kozh"
Floyd ]  13/13                  Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X KOZH
Floyd |
Floyd | Kózh is emaciated, scourged, his lips taken away by his master, his
Floyd | body wrapped in chains from which would hang the bodies of mortal
Floyd | slaves. This depiction's presence in the apartments was unusual; it
Floyd | suggested a man who was greatly invested in the discipline of his
Floyd | slaves. Over the years, the lashing of slaves to the lectern had made
Floyd | it a focus of fear and loathing for the servants in the manor; the
Floyd | master had liked to keep such a reminder close to him. Leather straps,
Floyd | bloodied and rough, still adorned it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x straps"
Floyd ]  13/13                  Looted ApartmenExits: D
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X STRAPS
Floyd |
Floyd | Kózh is emaciated, scourged, his lips taken away by his master, his
Floyd | body wrapped in chains from which would hang the bodies of mortal
Floyd | slaves. This depiction's presence in the apartments was unusual; it
Floyd | suggested a man who was greatly invested in the discipline of his
Floyd | slaves. Over the years, the lashing of slaves to the lectern had made
Floyd | it a focus of fear and loathing for the servants in the manor; the
Floyd | master had liked to keep such a reminder close to him. Leather straps,
Floyd | bloodied and rough, still adorned it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "well, that's it then"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "d"
Floyd ]  13/13                     Half a FoyerExits: N, S, W, and U
Floyd | >
Floyd | > D
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Half a Foyer
Floyd | This rich foyer had been floored with brilliant marble tiles and
Floyd | draped with silks. One of the grand columns along its side had
Floyd | toppled, preventing movement into most of the palace complex. Holes in
Floyd | the wall – hard to tell if they had been intentional passages – led
Floyd | north and south, outside. A hidden door in the west had become a
Floyd | jagged hole. And a collapsed staircase still allowed an unsteady climb
Floyd | to an upstairs room.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "s"
Floyd ]  13/13                   Overgrown GardExits: N and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > S
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Overgrown Garden
Floyd | This had been a formal garden, a gathering place for aristocrats. But
Floyd | she found within it only a dried fountain, and a lawn that had become
Floyd | overgrown with grass. The grass, in turn, was a matted patch of drying
Floyd | hay, caked with dust and ash, waiting to catch fire in the constant
Floyd | sun. A breach in the land was still open to the east; to the north,
Floyd | she could see a jagged passage into the remains of a palace.
Floyd |
Floyd | The fountain was long drained of water, but it still stood.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "e"
Floyd ]  13/13                    Twisted TunneExits: NE and W
Floyd | >
Floyd | > E
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Twisted Tunnel
Floyd | The land had contorted this section of street into a spiraling vortex
Floyd | of cobblestones and dirt, dead grass poking incongruously from the
Floyd | helical ceiling. The passage ran northeast and west.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "ne"
Floyd ]  13/13                     Gilded Lane Exits: SE and SW
Floyd | >
Floyd | > NE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Gilded Lane
Floyd | Gilded Lane had been paved with gold, and when gold proved too soft,
Floyd | it was paved with orichalcum. But then, orichalcum proved too soft,
Floyd | too. She saw a mess of green-gold tiles, stopped mid-spin, where the
Floyd | street used to be. All around her were the husks of crumbled
Floyd | buildings. The maw of a tunnel opened up to the southwest; the square
Floyd | was back southeast.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "x tunnel"
Floyd ]  13/13                     Gilded Lane Exits: SE and SW
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X TUNNEL
Floyd |
Floyd | The land had twisted, sucked streets and buildings into itself. She
Floyd | could see an entrance into one such tunnel, to the southwest.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I guess so. I was expecting more pleasantness in comparison to the poor side of town, but this was just as disturbing."
chaudmin says, "yeah"
chaudmin says, "moral of the story: Atlantis sucked"
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "se"
Floyd ]  13/13                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SE
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Ruined Square
Floyd | Besides the creeping dirt seemingly emerging from between the broken
Floyd | tiles, signs of ruin were around her. The land's breaking has reduced
Floyd | the gilded façades of the shops that surrounded the square to rubble
Floyd | and ashes. Breaks in the surrounding ring of debris were open to the
Floyd | northwest and east.
Floyd |
Floyd | A rush of turbulent water prevented passage to the east.
Floyd |
Floyd | She could also see her makeshift raft here.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Its virtue was interesting building material, I guess."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "enter raft"
Floyd ]  13/13                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ENTER RAFT
Floyd |
Floyd | [You have seen all 13 stories of Atlantis.]
Floyd |
Floyd | This will end the story. Are you sure?
DavidW says, "Gold, silver, orichalcum, mirthstone."
chaudmin says (to Floyd), "y"
Floyd ]  13/13                    Ruined SquareExits: NW and E
Floyd | This will end the story. Are you sure?
Floyd | > Y
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | She had found as much as she could of the world she was leaving
Floyd | behind. She carried a small history with her away from that place, but
Floyd | could not tell if that history deserved to survive; if it should be
Floyd | told. Still, she climbed onto her raft, with the trinkets and memories
Floyd | she could take, and waited for the water to rise and take her away, a
Floyd | small reminder of a dead world floating in an Atlantic current.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |     *** little remained from the fall of Atlantis ***
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to RESTART, RESTORE a saved game, QUIT, or UNDO the
Floyd | last command?
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "That was certainly interesting."
DavidW says, "Glad I never lived there, though."
chaudmin says, "yup"
DavidW says (to chaudmin), "Thank you for coming and driving."
chaudmin says, "no problem"
chaudmin says, "always a pleasure"
DavidW asks (of Roger), "Do you know where the post-mortem is posted?"
Roger says, "Let's see..."
Roger | [LINK]
DavidW says, "Thank you."
Roger disappears through an invisible gap in the MUD. You think you may have heard the sounds of chatting before the gap closed again. DavidW says, "heh: | What if you sifted through the ashes of a society that had just been wiped out, but the overwhelming mood was "these were horrible people and it's a good thing they're gone.""
chaudmin says, "that pretty much sums it up"
chaudmin sets location to elsewhere DavidW says, "Nice post-mortem. I enjoy reading those. Glad that's a new trend."
Roger says, "As my game Comrade was played here, I guess I could link to mine:"
DavidW says, "please do"
Roger | [LINK]
DavidW says, "Thanks"
Fang was described as having "hit the Internet with the force of a punch to the head."[24] DavidW says, "okay, I guess we're done for today. Thanks to everyone for playing and commenting, and I hope to see you all next week unless you're too busy writing your IntroComp entries."




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