ClubFloyd Transcript:
18 Rooms to Home (Room 16) by Carolyn VanEseltine
As played on ifMUD on June 14, 2015

The idea behind ClubFloyd is that each week at a pre-arranged time, a group of people meet online to cooperatively play a game of interactive fiction.

Below is a transcript of 18 Rooms to Home (Room 16) written by Carolyn VanEseltine. 18 Rooms to Home is an experimental work of serialized interactive fiction. This transcript contains the third installment. ClubFloyd has also played all previous installments. You can learn more about the game, including how to download it, by visiting IFDB.


WARNING! Below you will find a transcript of people playing this game, and it goes without saying that the transcript is full of spoilers. So, if you've never played this game, and think you might like to at some point, I do not recommend reading any further. Instead, you might want to return to the interactive fiction page.


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Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "load sleepmask 18rooms16"
Floyd ]
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | 18 Rooms to Home (Room 16)
Floyd | A serialized work of interactive fiction. by Carolyn VanEseltine
Floyd | Release 1 / Serial number 150613 / Inform 7 build 6L38 (I6/v6.33 lib
Floyd | 6/12N)
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | 18 Rooms to Home is a serialized game that begins at the end.
Floyd |
Floyd | As each update is released, the story will move further back in time -
Floyd | so the first release includes room 18, the second will include room 17
Floyd | and 18, the third includes 16, 17, and 18, and so on. All released
Floyd | rooms are available at [LINK]
Floyd |
Floyd | This release is Room 16. This is near the end of Yesenia's journey,
Floyd | but it's just a short way into yours.
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
DavidW says, "This is probably the bus itself, I'll guess."
Jacqueline says, "Hm, yeah."
Jacqueline pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | Tourists move down the steps toward Cabrillo Pavilion in long waves,
Floyd | unconsciously mimicking the ocean beyond. Yesenia loiters awkwardly at
Floyd | the sidewalk's edge and pretends to be fascinated by the fat little
Floyd | palm trees, the blue sign reading ZOO with its arrow, or anything else
Floyd | that will keep her face away from pedestrians.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia turns at the distant roar of a bus. The familiar white body
Floyd | with its upper yellow stripe comes around the bend, and she reads 20
Floyd | Carpinteria with relief. The crowd at the bus stop shuffles around,
Floyd | and Yesenia queues up to board, rolling the flowered suitcase behind
Floyd | her.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | 20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | It's like any other MTD bus: bluish-gray plastic seats crowded with
Floyd | passengers, huge windows, and an array of silver poles and black
Floyd | straps for standing passengers. No one's standing right now, though.
Floyd |
Floyd | The driver taps the fare box and gives Yesenia a meaningful look.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia braces her suitcase against her leg.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "i"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > I
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia digs hurriedly through her pockets and comes up with two
Floyd | crumpled singles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, ">put money in box?"
Emily says, "I assume we pay the fare, yeah"
Zach says, ">listen to singles"
Emily says (to floyd), "put money in box"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT MONEY IN BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "put singles in box"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > PUT SINGLES IN BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia flattens the two singles against the fare box and then feeds
Floyd | them into the machine. The fare box chimes its approval.
Floyd |
Floyd | The driver says, "No change," and points at the sign that says the
Floyd | same thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia says, "That's fine," and she hefts her suitcase and moves
Floyd | further in so the next person can pay. There are still a few seats
Floyd | free: one at the front behind the driver (occupied by a newspaper),
Floyd | one in the middle across from the rear door, and one at the very back.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "hm, choice!"
Emily asks, "are we a back of the bus kind of woman?"
Emily says (to floyd), "x newspaper"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | It's a folded copy of the Santa Barbara News-Press. Yesenia could see
Floyd | the articles if she unfolds it.
Floyd |
Floyd | The last two passengers pay and board.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I think we are a back of the bus woman, yes."
Emily says (to floyd), "get newspaper"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GET NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia picks up the folded newspaper.
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus pulls away from the curb. Yesenia shifts her weight to
Floyd | compensate and puts a hand on one of the silvery poles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "sit in back"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SIT IN BACK
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia takes the back seat.
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus picks up speed as it chugs along.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "read the paper?"
DavidW says, "yes please"
Emily says (to floyd), "unfold newspaper"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UNFOLD NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia unfolds the newspaper fully and holds it in front of her
Floyd | faceSince she's sitting in the back, she only has to angle her body
Floyd | and raise the newspaper to hide her face entirely. That worked out
Floyd | well.
Floyd |
Floyd | A portly man in his mid-forties opens up his iPad and starts listening
Floyd | to the news. Yesenia can tell that he's listening to the news because
Floyd | he's not using headphones, in clear violation of the bus policy sign.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "read newspaper"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia skims the newspaper, but she doesn't really want to read about
Floyd | the cleanup cost of the Santa Barbara oil spill. It's too depressing.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "There was a disturbance today at the Santa Barbara
Floyd | Zoo, when a masked woman confronted a group of schoolchildren. KEYT
Floyd | reporter Vanessa Ellis is on the scene. Vanessa, over to you."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia's heart drops like a brick. If there's footage....
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus rumbles through a pothole.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "we just came from the zoo, right?"
Zach asks, "Can we nag him about breaking the bus rules?"
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia says, "Excuse me, would you mind turning that off?"
Floyd |
Floyd | The portly man frowns at her. "Yes, yes I would. It's a free country."
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Thank you, Brandon! I'm at the Santa Barbara Zoo,
Floyd | where a group of schoolchildren were about to board their bus when a
Floyd | masked woman attempted to take them hostage."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus slows down before entering a traffic circle.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Oh Yesenia, what did you do?"
Zach says, "hooray"
Emily says (to floyd), "turn off ipad"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TURN OFF IPAD
Floyd |
Floyd | It isn't something Yesenia can switch.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Witnesses describe the woman as five-five, dressed in
Floyd | white and lavender, with a crown of flowers in her hair.  The pending
Floyd | catastrophe was averted when a bystander engaged her in hand-to-hand
Floyd | combat, giving students and teachers a chance to escape."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus swings majestically out onto Coast Village Road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "*crown of flowers*?"
Jacqueline says, "huh"
Zach says, "damn hippies"
Jacqueline says, "heh"
Zach says, "damn ninja hippies"
Emily asks, "are we the frilly villainess or are we the bystander?"
DavidW asks, "Maybe we were the bystander?"
Emily says (to floyd), "x me"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X ME
Jacqueline says, "Perhaps."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia wonders how much of her is visible behind the newspaper. How
Floyd | much of this worry is paranoia? How much do they need to see, to
Floyd | recognize her? There are thousands of people in Santa Barbara with her
Floyd | build, her height, and her coloration - but none of the others happen
Floyd | to be on the bus just now.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "One of the teachers, Katie Edwards, captured part of
Floyd | their encounter. We'll show you that footage now."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus pulls to a stop in accordance with traffic regulations.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "sooo that wasn't informative"
Jacqueline says, "This guy may out us in a sec."
Emily says, "I'm tempted to distract the man by kissing him but I bet that's not the correct solution"
DavidW asks, "The author plays her cards very closely, doesn't she?"
Emily asks, "could we focus on the ipad?"
Emily asks, "maybe burn it?"
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "x crown"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CROWN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says (to Floyd), "kiss man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KISS MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | The portly man might not like that.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad marvels, "Will you look at that!"
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus rumbles back into motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline says (to Game), "Oh, but he might."
Emily says (to floyd), "focus on ipad"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOCUS ON IPAD
Floyd |
Floyd | If only she could! But the man's holding his iPad out of the sunlight,
Floyd | to avoid glare on the screen.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "It's quite an impressive sight." After a pause, it
Floyd | continues, "Both the masked woman and the intervening bystander fled
Floyd | the scene before the police could arrive."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus picks up speed as it merges onto the freeway.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "Yeah, we need more self-confidence"
Jacqueline says, "Well, it is best to ask for his consent first."
Jacqueline says, "But yes."
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "man, kiss me"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > MAN, KISS ME
Floyd |
Floyd | The portly man has better things to do.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Anthony Torres was here with his daughter, and they
Floyd | saw the entire exchange. Anthony, what did you see?"
Floyd |
Floyd | Despite the air conditioning, several of the windows are cracked open,
Floyd | and there's enough wind to whip Yesenia's hair across her face.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach says, "aww"
Jacqueline says (to Game), "See, I'm not sure he does have better things to do."
Jacqueline says, "But okay."
Emily says (to floyd), "ask man about headphones"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK MAN ABOUT HEADPHONES
Floyd |
Floyd | (To speak with someone, use the command TALK TO.)
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "It was The Hyacinth. I'm sure of it. I study these
Floyd | things. She normally stomps around Miami, but she's come to California
Floyd | for some reason."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus exits the freeway and turns left over the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "we supposedly came from Miami"
Jacqueline exclaims, "The Hyacinth!"
Emily says (to floyd), "smell me"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SMELL ME
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia smells sunscreen, sea winds, diesel, and industrial
Floyd | antiseptic. Some of these are more pleasant than others..
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "What about the woman who stopped the attack?"
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus stops to pick up a few more passengers and then rumbles back
Floyd | into motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
chaudmin says, "~*pastel vigilantism*~"
DavidW asks, "Is that a superhero name or what, though?"
Emily says, "our suitcase has a floral design on it, IIRC"
Jacqueline nods.
DavidW asks, "So we were the attacker?"
Emily says, "I'm really not sure at this point"
Emily says, "I kind of want to hear more of the iPad report even though that might cause trouble for us"
DavidW says, "I haven't seen any obvious way to stop the report yet."
Emily says (to floyd), "sing"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SING
Floyd |
Floyd | That's not a verb I recognize.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "We could probably close the window, but I don't see what good that would do."
Emily says, "I guess we can't drown it out, either"
Emily says, "I thought it whipping the hair over our face was good"
Emily says, "more camouflage"
Jacqueline says (to DW), "I think the wind blowing hair across our face it a good thing."
Jacqueline says, "Timing"
Jacqueline says, "Well, it's our first play through. I say we just see where this goes."
DavidW asks, "Well, what else is around? The fan? The other passengers?"
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "listen"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LISTEN
Floyd |
Floyd | It's loud, both from the bus's steady roar and the chatter of
Floyd | passengers..
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad answers, "She was just a bitty thing, but she picked The
Floyd | Hyacinth up and threw her like a stuffed elephant. She was knocking
Floyd | her all over the parking lot. The Hyacinth knocked her down a few
Floyd | times, but she just got right back up. She must've had powers of her
Floyd | own."
Floyd |
Floyd | The manicured lawns of Toro Canyon pass the bus windows and vanish
Floyd | again.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline asks, "Should we just keep listening?"
Emily says, "I guess"
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "listen"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LISTEN
Floyd |
Floyd | It's loud, both from the bus's steady roar and the chatter of
Floyd | passengers..
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says in a little kid's voice, "It was pretty scary."
Floyd |
Floyd | A recorded voice announces, "Real and Sandpiper," and the bus stops to
Floyd | let the heavyset woman off before lurching back into motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Jacqueline), "I think we'll hear it regardless."
Emily says, "if this is like the other game, it's short enough to replay if we decide we need to change course"
Jacqueline says, "That's what I'm thinking."
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "listen"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LISTEN
Floyd |
Floyd | It's loud, both from the bus's steady roar and the chatter of
Floyd | passengers..
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Thank you, Anthony. Brandon, back to you."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yucca and palms and carefully clipped shrubbery yield to the
Floyd | fantastically painted bridge railing outside Kim's Market.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
two-star asks, "do we know where our stop is?"
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Let's look at the current state of the Santa Barbara
Floyd | County oil spill."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus has reached Carpinteria proper, and the bus begins to empty as
Floyd | more people get off at each stop.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline says (to **), "I would think so."
Jacqueline asks, "Huh. So he didn't stand up and point at us. That's... good?"
Jacqueline says (to Floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Kevin Reese Dolman, aka Surgical Strike, has publicly
Floyd | repented his act of terrorism and joined the cleanup efforts alongside
Floyd | Angelina Manatee. More than 44% of the coastline is now clear, thanks
Floyd | primarily to the efforts of regular volunteers."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia sees her stop coming up, and she presses the yellow strip. The
Floyd | bus chimes and announces, "Stop requested."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
two-star asks, "Sorry, I meant do we, the players, know where our, the PC's, stop is?"
DavidW says, "Perhaps we did the right thing with the newspaper."
two-star says, "And, never mind."
Jacqueline says (to **), "We don't. We only know that we live in the Tradewinds Apts, iirc"
Jacqueline says, "But yeah, I figured Carolyn would make that part easy, as she has."
two-star says, "I was thinking this was going to be a thing where we had the option of getting off at different places."
Emily says, "'Angelina Manatee'"
Emily asks, "I dunno, I guess we get off?"
Jacqueline says, "Yeah"
Jacqueline says, "Once the bus stops."
Emily says, "(and are we now going to have to play out that whole encounter with our enemy again?)"
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "When asked about the experience of working with her
Floyd | former nemesis, Manatee said...." but the bus rolls to a stop, and
Floyd | Yesenia misses the sound bite as she heads for the door.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia hefts her suitcase down from the bus. It's about three minutes
Floyd | from the bus stop to her apartment, and she takes the distance
Floyd | briskly, stopping only once to shove windblown hair out of her eyes.
Floyd |
Floyd | About halfway there, she realizes that she doesn't have her purse.
Floyd | ¡Carajo! She tries to think back to when she last had it.,
Floyd | and she realizes it must have been in the restaurant office. She'll
Floyd | have to ask Camilla for a ride once she gets home.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's an easy cut across the grass, but Yesenia takes the sidewalk
Floyd | instead, with the suitcase rolling along behind her. She rounds the
Floyd | corner of the building and starts up the front walk.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
DavidW says, "yes"
Emily pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | A wide concrete walkway leads around the three-story building and up
Floyd | to the front door, flanked by ground lights on both sides, which shine
Floyd | in response to the setting sun. On the right, regimentally spaced palm
Floyd | trees provide an illusion of privacy for the west-facing windows. On
Floyd | the left, there's a parking lot for the apartment, but since the
Floyd | divider is all of six inches wide, the parked cars in the first row
Floyd | rest their noses against the walkway.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia parks her suitcase beside the building's front door.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a bank of resident mailboxes set into the outer wall, just to
Floyd | the right of the front door. The doorbells are on the other side.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "...hm"
Emily says, "I feel like structurally the deal should be that we can do something different from last time, but I 'm not sure we actually learned anything on the ride that would change what we do now"
Jacqueline says, "So we got a little more (but vague) backstory"
Emily says, "yeah"
DavidW says, "Perhaps we lucked out with the bus ride, but I don't see that we got new options for the last two rooms."
Jacqueline says, "We got a hint that we're probably strong, but we knew that from what we did to the car last time."
Emily says (to floyd), "open mailboxs"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN MAILBOXS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "open mailbox"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN MAILBOX
Floyd |
Floyd | The mailbox is locked.  Yesenia will have to unlock it first.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "x hyacinth"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X HYACINTH
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia can't see any such thing.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "unlock mailbox"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > UNLOCK MAILBOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia reaches automatically for her mailbox key, but of course she
Floyd | doesn't have her keys. Because she doesn't have her purse. Because
Floyd | it's in the restaurant.
Floyd |
Floyd | But... she pauses to consider the angles of the sun. There's still
Floyd | sunlight touching the mailbox, which means she could open it with
Floyd | sufficient focus. And it wouldn't be the first time she's
Floyd | opened the mailbox without a key.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "so this seems the same"
Emily says (to floyd), "focus on mailbox"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOCUS ON MAILBOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Shielded from sight by the building and a palm tree, Yesenia stretches
Floyd | her awareness to the setting sun. The orange light warms her, just as
Floyd | it warms the mailbox.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sun has power over the mailbox; its heat can make the metal
Floyd | expand. Its absence can make the metal shrink. And she has
Floyd | power over....
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia focuses. The tumblers click into the unlocked position, and
Floyd | she pulls it open.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Roger says, "That is a FEDERAL OFFENSE young lady"
Emily says (to floyd), "get all from mailbox"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GET ALL FROM MAILBOX
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia pulls the mail out of her mailbox. Among the advertisements
Floyd | and junk mail (promptly discarded into a convenient recycling bin),
Floyd | she discovers three white envelopes.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline says (to Roger), "No, tampering with someone ELSE's mail is. This is ours, so it's okay."
Emily says (to floyd), "open first envelope"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN FIRST ENVELOPE
DavidW says (to Roger), "We're possibly a supervillian at this point."
Floyd |
Floyd | According to the postmark, this envelope was mailed from Santa Barbara
Floyd | three days ago.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia rips open the first envelope, revealing a letter.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Roger says, "Behold our minor misdemeanors and tremble"
Emily asks, "does anyone have a better idea than just redoing what we did last time?"
DavidW says (to Emily), "I have no better idea."
chaudmin asks, "have you tried losing the fight?"
DavidW says (to chaudmin), "Then we get restrained and dragged inside."
Jacqueline says, "Hm. Breakfast just arrived, so I'll be watching for a few."
Emily says (to floyd), "open second envelope"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN SECOND ENVELOPE
Floyd |
Floyd | According to the postmark, this envelope was mailed from Santa Barbara
Floyd | two days ago.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia rips open the second envelope, revealing a letter.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "open third envelope"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN THIRD ENVELOPE
Floyd |
Floyd | According to the postmark, this envelope was mailed from Santa Barbara
Floyd | one day ago.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia rips open the third envelope, revealing a letter.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "read first letter"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ FIRST LETTER
Floyd |
Floyd | (the first letter)
Floyd | Yesenia unfolds the first letter.
Floyd |
Floyd | It's typed in simple serif letters.
Floyd |
Floyd | We need to talk. Call me - 
Floyd |
Floyd | and a number that Yesenia doesn't recognize. There's a 305 area code,
Floyd | though, and that's the Miami area.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "read second letter"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ SECOND LETTER
Floyd |
Floyd | (the second letter)
Floyd | Yesenia unfolds the second letter.
Floyd |
Floyd | It's typed in simple serif letters.
Floyd |
Floyd | I'm trying to help you. You don't have to hide from me.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "read third letter"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ THIRD LETTER
Floyd |
Floyd | (the third letter)
Floyd | As Yesenia unfolds the letter, a playing card falls to the ground.
Floyd |
Floyd | At the sight of it, Yesenia's stomach clenches, and goose bumps
Floyd | prickle across her shoulders.
Floyd |
Floyd | It's typed in simple serif letters.
Floyd |
Floyd | Call me, or I'm coming to see you.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "get card"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GET CARD
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia picks up the playing card.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "x card"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CARD
Floyd |
Floyd | It's a standard playing card: paper coated with plastic, with a blue
Floyd | design on the back.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia turns it over. As she expected, it's the Jack of Spades -
Floyd | which means the Jack of Shadows.
Floyd |
Floyd | Chris, she thinks, and glances around apprehensively. Is
Floyd | Chris already here? She always drives, because she hates the bus....
Floyd | .
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "x car"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X CAR
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia scans the parking lot again, taking her time. She doesn't know
Floyd | what Chris is driving these days, but she knows it'll be a cut above
Floyd | the norm.
Floyd |
Floyd | And it is - a sleek, matte black car with a T-shaped logo on its nose,
Floyd | sitting three cars down and barely a centimeter off the walkway. The
Floyd | large black crystals hanging off the rearview mirror seal her
Floyd | suspicions.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "how did we vandalize the car last time?"
DavidW says, "We kicked it."
Emily says (to floyd), "kick car"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KICK CAR
Floyd |
Floyd | (the sleek black car)
Floyd | Yesenia takes a deep, centering breath and then slams her foot into
Floyd | the black car's front bumper. She's reserving her strength; after all,
Floyd | there's no need to punt it across the parking lot, and there would be
Floyd | awkward questions if she did.
Floyd |
Floyd | The car launches an strenuous protest, flashing its lights wildly,
Floyd | shrilling an alarm, and honking its horn - not polite little beeps,
Floyd | but bewildered, angry blares. If Chris is anywhere around, that should
Floyd | get her attention.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | (the sleek black car)
Floyd | Yesenia considers kicking the pretty black car again, but she decides
Floyd | against it. Someone might see her do it, and the car is already upset
Floyd | enough.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sleek black car flashes its lights, honks its horn, and shrills
Floyd | for help.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "iirc, we fought her than focused on her to make her go."
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The sleek black car flashes its lights, honks its horn, and shrills
Floyd | for help.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a sudden clatter from the apartment building, and then Chris
Floyd | explodes from within.
Floyd |
Floyd | Chris is tall and well-coiffed, as always, but her brown eyes are wide
Floyd | with rage, and if she has a perfect manicure today, it's concealed by
Floyd | her clenched fists. "What the hell are you doing? What the
Floyd | hell are you doing to my car?"
Floyd |
Floyd | "Getting your attention," Yesenia says. "It seems to have worked."
Floyd |
Floyd | (To speak with Chris, TALK TO CHRIS.)
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "fight chris"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FIGHT CHRIS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia steps into Chris and then drops to execute a leg sweep.  Chris
Floyd | ducks around the blow.
Floyd |
Floyd | Chris says in an aggrieved tone, "Knock it off!"
Floyd |
Floyd | The sleek black car flashes its lights, honks its horn, and shrills
Floyd | for help.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "g"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > G
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia lunges for Chris and throws an elbow toward her face.  Chris
Floyd | dodges sideways.
Floyd |
Floyd | Chris exclaims, "I didn't come here to fight!"
Floyd |
Floyd | The sleek black car flashes its lights, honks its horn, and shrills
Floyd | for help.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "fight chris"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FIGHT CHRIS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia pivots toward Chris and then drops to execute a leg sweep.
Floyd | Chris fends her off, though not without difficulty.
Floyd |
Floyd | Chris exclaims, "Knock it off!"
Floyd |
Floyd | The sleek black car flashes its lights, honks its horn, and shrills
Floyd | for help.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "hm"
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to chris"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO CHRIS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia says, "You need to leave. Now."
Floyd |
Floyd | Instead of answering, Chris glances west to the setting sun. It's so
Floyd | familiar a gesture that it makes Yesenia's heart ache, and for a
Floyd | second she even forgets what it means. But Chris is the Jack of
Floyd | Shadows....
Floyd |
Floyd | The sleek black car flashes its lights, honks its horn, and shrills
Floyd | for help.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "focus on chris"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOCUS ON CHRIS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia reaches her mind toward the sun. It's setting rapidly, but
Floyd | there's still enough light... and she seizes that light and focuses
Floyd | upon Chris. She doesn't want to hurt her - but she closes her power
Floyd | all around her. There's just enough vibration leaking through for
Floyd | Chris to know what's happening.
Floyd |
Floyd | Chris freezes immediately. "Think about what you're doing," she says
Floyd | in a tight voice.
Floyd |
Floyd | "I thought about it," Yesenia says. "And I want you to go away. And
Floyd | leave me alone. Now." She waits a few breaths longer, to make
Floyd | sure Chris gets the point, and then releases the power.
Floyd |
DavidW says, "Now focus on her."
Floyd | Chris glares at her, but then she goes to the car. A door handle
Floyd | extrudes as Chris reaches for it, and she gets inside the car.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia watches the sleek black car back up, and she watches it leave
Floyd | the parking lot, and she keeps watching until it vanishes down the
Floyd | road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | The front door has been propped open with a rock, but there's no one
Floyd | in sight. Yesenia kicks it out of the way - why doesn't anyone
Floyd | understand security around here? - and swings her suitcase into the
Floyd | familiar darkness of her apartment building. Two flights of stairs
Floyd | later, she reaches the door to her apartment.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
Emily pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | During the day, the hallway's cool shadows provide relief from the
Floyd | California sun. But at night, it's simply dark, because the scattered
Floyd | wall sconces aren't close enough or bright enough to provide decent
Floyd | illumination.  It couldn't be a better environment for the Jack of
Floyd | Shadows if someone had planned it that way. Yesenia never realized
Floyd | that before, and she feels sick at the idea.
Floyd |
Floyd | The door of Yesenia's apartment stands wide open. There's a folded
Floyd | note taped to it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "get note"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GET NOTE
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia peels the note off the door.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "read note"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ NOTE
Floyd |
Floyd | It's a plain white piece of paper, folded into thirds. Illegible black
Floyd | marker has smudged through from the inside.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a muffled sound from within the apartment, and Yesenia calls
Floyd | Camilla's name as she crosses the threshold at speed.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |     *** It could have been so much worse.
Floyd |
Floyd | (This ending became available in Room 17. It is the best ending
Floyd | currently available.) ***
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to RESTART, RESTORE a saved game, QUIT, or UNDO the
Floyd | last command?
Floyd | >
Emily says, "..."
Emily says, "huh. okay."
Jacqueline asks, "Oh, huh. I guess since she's the Jack of Shadows she is empowered by shadows the way we are with the sun?"
Emily says, "I think so, yeah"
DavidW asks, "hm. 'Hyacinth' and 'crown of flowers' seems to suggest plant or flower power, maybe?"
Emily asks, "sort of Poison Ivy?"
DavidW says (to Emily), "Perhaps."
Jacqueline asks, "What else do we know that's new?"
Emily says, "we have long hair and we started the game with two dollars"
DavidW says, "There were other hero and villian names mentioned in the report."
Emily says, "yeah, there was some kind of terrorist strike"
Emily says, "that is now being cleaned up"
DavidW asks, "There might be more to read in the newspaper?"
Jacqueline says, "Oh, true."
Jacqueline says, "I guess instead of listening/waiting, I should have had us read the paper."
Emily says, "the first response we got suggested that she was just skimming at best, though"
Emily says, "but we could start over and see, for sure"
Jacqueline says, "Oh."
DavidW asks, "Also, how sure are we that 2 dollars was all we had? What was the bus fare; can we read the fare box?"
Emily asks, "dunno. restart?"
DavidW says, "yes, please."
Emily says (to floyd), "restart"
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | 18 Rooms to Home (Room 16)
Floyd | A serialized work of interactive fiction. by Carolyn VanEseltine
Floyd | Release 1 / Serial number 150613 / Inform 7 build 6L38 (I6/v6.33 lib
Floyd | 6/12N)
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | 18 Rooms to Home is a serialized game that begins at the end.
Floyd |
Floyd | As each update is released, the story will move further back in time -
Floyd | so the first release includes room 18, the second will include room 17
Floyd | and 18, the third includes 16, 17, and 18, and so on. All released
Floyd | rooms are available at [LINK]
Floyd |
Floyd | This release is Room 16. This is near the end of Yesenia's journey,
Floyd | but it's just a short way into yours.
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
Jacqueline says, "I missed that about skimming the paper. So perhaps not. Still, let's try sitting somewhere else."
Emily pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | Tourists move down the steps toward Cabrillo Pavilion in long waves,
Floyd | unconsciously mimicking the ocean beyond. Yesenia loiters awkwardly at
Floyd | the sidewalk's edge and pretends to be fascinated by the fat little
Floyd | palm trees, the blue sign reading ZOO with its arrow, or anything else
Floyd | that will keep her face away from pedestrians.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia turns at the distant roar of a bus. The familiar white body
Floyd | with its upper yellow stripe comes around the bend, and she reads 20
Floyd | Carpinteria with relief. The crowd at the bus stop shuffles around,
Floyd | and Yesenia queues up to board, rolling the flowered suitcase behind
Floyd | her.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | 20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | It's like any other MTD bus: bluish-gray plastic seats crowded with
Floyd | passengers, huge windows, and an array of silver poles and black
Floyd | straps for standing passengers. No one's standing right now, though.
Floyd |
Floyd | The driver taps the fare box and gives Yesenia a meaningful look.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia braces her suitcase against her leg.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "x fare box"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X FARE BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a standard fare box beside the driver's seat.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Zach has had his fill of playing for now, and goes back to the Lounge.
Emily says (to floyd), "read fare box"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ FARE BOX
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a standard fare box beside the driver's seat.
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus driver waits for Yesenia to pay her fare.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "x driver"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > X DRIVER
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus driver is wearing a distinctly non-uniform jean jacket over a
Floyd | button-down shirt. Her expression conveys the boredom of a thousand
Floyd | summers spent driving up and down US-101.
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus driver says, "Come on, you're holding up the line."
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says (to Floyd), "ask driver about fare"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > ASK DRIVER ABOUT FARE
Floyd |
Floyd | (To speak with someone, use the command TALK TO.)
Floyd |
Floyd | A heavyset woman in a pale blue shirt pushes past Yesenia. She drops
Floyd | two bus tokens in, paying for Yesenia's fare as well as her own.
Floyd | "There. Go sit down," she says impatiently.
Floyd |
Floyd | There are still a few seats free: one at the front behind the driver
Floyd | (occupied by a newspaper), one in the middle across from the rear
Floyd | door, and one at the very back.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to driver"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO DRIVER
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus driver interrupts her. "Honey, I got a bus to drive here,
Floyd | okay? Please don't distract me."
Floyd |
Floyd | The last two passengers pay and board.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "right, okay"
DavidW says, "The heavyset woman paid FOR us."
Emily says, "I guess carolyn didn't want us being held up on this"
DavidW says, "She was mentioned in our first runthrough."
Emily says (to floyd), "look"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > LOOK
Floyd |
Floyd | 20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | It's like any other MTD bus: bluish-gray plastic seats crowded with
Floyd | passengers, huge windows, and an array of silver poles and black
Floyd | straps for standing passengers. No one's standing right now, though.
Floyd |
Floyd | There are still a few unoccupied seats: one at the front behind the
Floyd | driver, one in the middle across from the rear door, and one at the
Floyd | very back.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia's suitcase is braced against her leg so that it won't roll
Floyd | anywhere or fall over.
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus pulls away from the curb. Yesenia shifts her weight to
Floyd | compensate and puts a hand on one of the silvery poles.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline says, "Well, it's done with smoke and mirrors (I personally wouldn't have guessed the syntax) so yeah, this is an elegant work-around."
Emily says (to floyd), "get newspaper"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > GET NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia picks up the folded newspaper.
Floyd |
Floyd | A couple people glance at Yesenia, likely because she's standing when
Floyd | there's room to sit.
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus picks up speed as it chugs along.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "middle? or front?"
DavidW says, "hm. Front this time, maybe."
chaudmin says, "could also try not hiding behind the newspaper"
DavidW says, "I'm not sure what might be more interesting."
Jacqueline says, "I kind of want to be outed this time."
Emily says (to floyd), "sit in front"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > SIT IN FRONT
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia takes the front seat.
Floyd |
Floyd | A portly man in his mid-forties opens up his iPad and starts listening
Floyd | to the news. Yesenia can tell that he's listening to the news because
Floyd | he's not using headphones, in clear violation of the bus policy sign.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline says, "I feel like we'll get more info that way."
Emily says (to floyd), "read newspaper"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ NEWSPAPER
Floyd |
Floyd | It's a folded copy of the Santa Barbara News-Press. Yesenia could see
Floyd | the articles if she unfolds it.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "There was a disturbance today at the Santa Barbara
Floyd | Zoo, when a masked woman confronted a group of schoolchildren. KEYT
Floyd | reporter Vanessa Ellis is on the scene. Vanessa, over to you."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia's heart drops like a brick. If there's footage....
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus rumbles through a pothole.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Thank you, Brandon! I'm at the Santa Barbara Zoo,
Floyd | where a group of schoolchildren were about to board their bus when a
Floyd | masked woman attempted to take them hostage."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus slows down before entering a traffic circle.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "just keep waiting? I'm afraid if we unfold the nespaper to read it, that will also prevent being caught"
Jacqueline says, "Yeah"
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Witnesses describe the woman as five-five, dressed in
Floyd | white and lavender, with a crown of flowers in her hair.  The pending
Floyd | catastrophe was averted when a bystander engaged her in hand-to-hand
Floyd | combat, giving students and teachers a chance to escape."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus swings majestically out onto Coast Village Road.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "One of the teachers, Katie Edwards, captured part of
Floyd | their encounter. We'll show you that footage now."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus pulls to a stop in accordance with traffic regulations.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "I wonder why we'd terrorize children, though? That's not a thing even supervillians do, normally."
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad marvels, "Will you look at that!"
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus rumbles back into motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "maybe we were tragically misunderstood"
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "It's quite an impressive sight." After a pause, it
Floyd | continues, "Both the masked woman and the intervening bystander fled
Floyd | the scene before the police could arrive."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus picks up speed as it merges onto the freeway.
Floyd |
Floyd | The portly man suddenly swivels in his chair to stare at Yesenia. He
Floyd | squints at his iPad again and then squints at her unshielded face.
Floyd | "Hey! That's you!"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "yay"
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia says, "Please, keep your voice down."
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Anthony Torres was here with his daughter, and they
Floyd | saw the entire exchange. Anthony, what did you see?"
Floyd |
Floyd | Despite the air conditioning, several of the windows are cracked open,
Floyd | and there's enough wind to whip Yesenia's hair across her face.
Floyd |
Floyd | The portly man says, "You're a hero! The press want to talk to you!"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "I guess we're the bystander, then?"
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia says, "I don't want any attention."
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "It was The Hyacinth. I'm sure of it. I study these
Floyd | things. She normally stomps around Miami, but she's come to California
Floyd | for some reason."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus exits the freeway and turns left over the bridge.
Floyd |
Floyd | The portly man says, "Hey, everyone! That girl - she's a hero! She
Floyd | saved a bunch of kids from The Hyacinth this afternoon!"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oh, maybe."
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia says, "Please, don't do this."
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "What about the woman who stopped the attack?"
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus stops to pick up a few more passengers and then rumbles back
Floyd | into motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | One of the new passengers gives Yesenia a dirty look as he maneuvers
Floyd | around her flowered suitcase.
Floyd |
Floyd | Other people on the bus are taking notice now. "Doesn't The Hyacinth
Floyd | stay in Florida?" someone asks.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "ah, More than maybe."
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | There's no point any more. The entire bus is looking at her.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad answers, "She was just a bitty thing, but she picked The
Floyd | Hyacinth up and threw her like a stuffed elephant. She was knocking
Floyd | her all over the parking lot. The Hyacinth knocked her down a few
Floyd | times, but she just got right back up. She must've had powers of her
Floyd | own."
Floyd |
Floyd | The manicured lawns of Toro Canyon pass the bus windows and vanish
Floyd | again.
Floyd |
Floyd | The man's seatmate corroborates, "No, she's in town. Just saw it on
Floyd | the news."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia hears someone dialing a cell phone, but she can't spot who's
Floyd | doing it - she just knows the sound came from the back of the bus.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
kpaquette says (to jacqueline), "I need to go because I want to play another game."
Emily says, "UH OH"
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to man"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO MAN
Floyd |
Floyd | There's no point any more. The entire bus is looking at her.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says in a little kid's voice, "It was pretty scary."
Floyd |
Floyd | A recorded voice announces, "Real and Sandpiper," and the bus stops to
Floyd | let the heavyset woman off before lurching back into motion.
Floyd |
Floyd | Everyone's chattering now and staring at Yesenia. Even the bus driver
Floyd | glances back in the rear view mirror. It's exactly the kind of
Floyd | attention she doesn't want.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Phone cameras are ev-ry-where."
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Thank you, Anthony. Brandon, back to you."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yucca and palms and carefully clipped shrubbery yield to the
Floyd | fantastically painted bridge railing outside Kim's Market.
Floyd |
Floyd | Another passenger says, "I've got to call my sister about this!"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Let's look at the current state of the Santa Barbara
Floyd | County oil spill."
Floyd |
Floyd | The bus has reached Carpinteria proper, and the bus begins to empty as
Floyd | more people get off at each stop.
Floyd |
Floyd | No one on the bus cares about the Santa Barbara County oil spill.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Jacqueline says (to Katie), "Okay. Have fun."
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  20 to Carpinteria
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "Kevin Reese Dolman, aka Surgical Strike, has publicly
Floyd | repented his act of terrorism and joined the cleanup efforts alongside
Floyd | Angelina Manatee. More than 44% of the coastline is now clear, thanks
Floyd | primarily to the efforts of regular volunteers."
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia sees her stop coming up, and she presses the yellow strip. The
Floyd | bus chimes and announces, "Stop requested."
Floyd |
Floyd | A bleached blond in huge fuchsia sunglasses touches Yesenia's arm.
Floyd | "Don't look so glum, chica. Smile! You're a hero!"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | The iPad says, "When asked about the experience of working with her
Floyd | former nemesis, Manatee said...." but the bus rolls to a stop, and
Floyd | Yesenia misses the sound bite as she heads for the door.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia hefts her suitcase down from the bus. It's about three minutes
Floyd | from the bus stop to her apartment, and she takes the distance
Floyd | briskly, stopping only once to shove windblown hair out of her eyes.
Floyd |
Floyd | About halfway there, she realizes that she doesn't have her purse.
Floyd | ¡Carajo! She tries to think back to when she last had it.,
Floyd | and she realizes it must have been in the restaurant office. She'll
Floyd | have to ask Camilla for a ride once she gets home.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's an easy cut across the grass, but Yesenia takes the sidewalk
Floyd | instead, with the suitcase rolling along behind her. She rounds the
Floyd | corner of the building and starts up the front walk.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
Emily pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | A flashbulb goes off in Yesenia's face. As she flinches back, a
Floyd | reporter lunges forward, accompanied by his camerawoman.
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | A wide concrete walkway leads around the three-story building and up
Floyd | to the front door, flanked by ground lights on both sides, which shine
Floyd | in response to the setting sun. On the right, regimentally spaced palm
Floyd | trees provide an illusion of privacy for the west-facing windows. On
Floyd | the left, there's a parking lot for the apartment, but since the
Floyd | divider is all of six inches wide, the parked cars in the first row
Floyd | rest their noses against the walkway.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a minor gaggle of photographers and reporters milling about on
Floyd | the front walk.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia belatedly remembers to drop her suitcase. It almost falls
Floyd | over, but she catches it just in time.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a bank of resident mailboxes set into the outer wall, just to
Floyd | the right of the front door. The doorbells are on the other side.
Floyd |
Floyd | One of the reporters asks her camera crew, "Are you getting this?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oh no"
Emily says, "ha ha, whoops"
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to reporters"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO REPORTERS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia shouts, "No comment! No comment!" and raises her newspaper to
Floyd | block her face from the flashbulbs.
Floyd |
Floyd | A cameraman circles around for a different angle.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "Awkward"
Emily says (to floyd), "focus on mailbox"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOCUS ON MAILBOX
Floyd |
Floyd | With the press here? She might as well write her media handle on her
Floyd | own forehead.
Floyd |
Floyd | One of the reporters asks his camera crew, "Are we losing the light?"
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to reporters"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO REPORTERS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia shouts, "No comment! No comment!" and raises her newspaper to
Floyd | block her face from the flashbulbs.
Floyd |
Floyd | A reporter shouts, "Are you the Sun Queen's protege?"
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia feels the blood drain from her face. "No comment," she
Floyd | manages.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "focus on camera?"
Emily says, "I bet we are the Sun queen's protege!"
Emily says (to floyd), "focus on camera"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > FOCUS ON CAMERA
Floyd |
Floyd | While Yesenia could focus on the enormous black camera, that would
Floyd | be... indiscreet. And she strives for discretion these days.
Floyd |
Floyd | Another flashbulb goes off in Yesenia's face.  Yesenia shields her
Floyd | face with her newspaper.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW asks, "Sun Queen?"
Emily says, "or the Sun Queen ourself"
Emily | Ã
Emily | A reporter shouts, "Are you the Sun Queen's protege?"
kpaquette sleeps Emily asks, "just go inside?"
DavidW says, "I guess so"
chaudmin says, "try kicking the car anyway"
Emily says (to floyd), "kick car"
Floyd ]  Tradewind Apartments - Front Walk
Floyd | >
Floyd | > KICK CAR
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia is no stranger to violence, but she doesn't see the need for
Floyd | it here.
Floyd |
Floyd | Another flashbulb goes off in Yesenia's face.  Yesenia shields her
Floyd | face with her newspaper.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
kpaquette goes home. chaudmin says, "oh wait, we don't have the card"
Jacqueline says, "Can't kick the car without reading the letters."
Emily says, "ah-- it won't let us unless we've opened the mailbox, and we can't do that without focusing, which the game won't let us do with reporters watching"
DavidW says, "We haven't found Chris's car yet."
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia kicks the rock out of the way and swings her suitcase into the
Floyd | familiar darkness of her apartment building. She shuts the door on the
Floyd | press, like shutting out an unwanted cat, but she can still hear their
Floyd | voices through the door.
Floyd |
Floyd | Their clamoring fades as she climbs the two flights of stairs leading
Floyd | to her apartment. It's been a very long day. It's good to come home,
Floyd | however briefly.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Please press SPACE to continue.
Emily pushes the green 'space' button.
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | During the day, the hallway's cool shadows provide relief from the
Floyd | California sun. But at night, it's simply dark, because the scattered
Floyd | wall sconces aren't close enough or bright enough to provide decent
Floyd | illumination. Still, this is home, and there's nothing more welcome to
Floyd | Yesenia right now than the sight of her own front door.
Floyd |
Floyd | There's a folded note taped to the door. Yesenia frowns at it.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "oh right, the rock."
Emily says (to floyd), "open note"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > OPEN NOTE
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia peels the note off the door.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia unfolds the note.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "read note"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > READ NOTE
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia stares at the note. There's one sentence written on it in
Floyd | stark black marker.
Floyd |
Floyd | Come on in.
Floyd |
Floyd | It's not Camilla's handwriting.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia hears footsteps and voices on the stairs - not the tired
Floyd | sounds of a neighbor, but the eager bumbling of the press. She curses
Floyd | her neighbors silently. Doesn't anyone care about security?
Floyd | Anyone at all?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily asks, "go inside, or wait for the press to catch up?"
DavidW says, "I'm torn."
Emily says, "I guess we could go inside, end the game, undo, then wait"
DavidW says, "okay"
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia reaches out to try the door, and the knob turns easily. Unease
Floyd | coils in her belly, and a familiar prickling runs down her arms.
Floyd |
Floyd | She pushes the door open.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia can hear the press galumphing through the hallway below her.
Floyd | It's not as organized as a search-and-rescue, but it's likely to be
Floyd | fruitful very soon.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | She's about to cross the threshold when an all-too-familiar voice
Floyd | within says, "Welcome home."
Floyd |
Floyd | "Chris," Yesenia says. Ice forms in her gut, but her skin prickles
Floyd | with heat. "What are you doing here?" She bites back her next words -
Floyd | What have you done to Camilla?
Floyd |
Floyd | "Welcome home, Yesenia," the other woman says. "Or should I say..."
Floyd |
Floyd | "No," Yesenia says sharply, "you shouldn't." And she steps through the
Floyd | door.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | *** Too many mistakes in a very long day. Or maybe not
Floyd | enough....
Floyd |
Floyd | (This ending became available in Room 18. A better ending
Floyd | exists.) ***
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to RESTART, RESTORE a saved game, QUIT, or UNDO the
Floyd | last command?
Floyd | >
Emily says, "...right. okay. about the same as originally."
Emily says (to floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia hears footsteps and voices on the stairs - not the tired
Floyd | sounds of a neighbor, but the eager bumbling of the press. She curses
Floyd | her neighbors silently. Doesn't anyone care about security?
Floyd | Anyone at all?
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia can hear the press galumphing through the hallway below her.
Floyd | It's not as organized as a search-and-rescue, but it's likely to be
Floyd | fruitful very soon.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia hears the press galloping up the stairs to her floor.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "z"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > Z
Floyd |
Floyd | Time passes.
Floyd |
Floyd | A reporter reaches the top of the stairs, turns the corner, and spots
Floyd | Yesenia. "I found her!" she shouts to her cameraman, and the rest of
Floyd | the gaggle descends.
Floyd |
Floyd | Reporters are good at spotting blood in the water.  A reporter shouts,
Floyd | "Are you, in fact, the Sun Queen?"
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia feels the brief, mad temptation to shout, "Yes, yes, you found
Floyd | me!" but she resists the urge.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "talk to press"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > TALK TO PRESS
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia raises her hands toward the reporters and says in a loud,
Floyd | clear, voice, "You're trespassing. You need to leave this building
Floyd | before I call management."
Floyd |
Floyd | With a collective "awwww," the press shuffles back down the stairs.
Floyd | Yesenia stands listening until the door clicks behind the last of
Floyd | them.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
DavidW says, "We ARE the Sun Queen."
Emily says (to floyd), "undo"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd |
Floyd | > UNDO
Floyd |
Floyd | Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | [Previous turn undone.]
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says, "let's go in with the press here"
Jacqueline says, "Yeah, keep the press here."
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | Yesenia reaches out to try the door, and the knob turns easily.
Floyd |
Floyd | It shouldn't be unlocked - dammit, Camilla! How many times do
Floyd | they have to have this conversation? Carp may be the home of surf, but
Floyd | that doesn't mean it's always going to be safe.
Floyd |
Floyd | She pushes the door open.
Floyd |
Floyd | Another flashbulb goes off in Yesenia's face.  Yesenia shields her
Floyd | face with her newspaper.
Floyd |
Floyd | >
Emily says (to floyd), "in"
Floyd ]  Tradewinds Apartments - Hallway
Floyd | >
Floyd | > IN
Floyd |
Floyd | She's about to cross the threshold when the air itself catches her in
Floyd | a vice grip. Several strangled cries of dismay come from behind her,
Floyd | and she realizes the reporters and camera crews are trapped, too.
Floyd |
Floyd | From within the apartment, Chris's all-too-familiar voice says, "Have
Floyd | you lost your mind for good? Why did you bring the press
Floyd | here?" The voice lowers. "You shouldn't have done this. You shouldn't
Floyd | have made this public. Now you're responsible for what I have
Floyd | to do." And the invisible grip jerks Yesenia across the threshold.
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |     *** And the Jack of Shadows succumbs to the dark.
Floyd |
Floyd | (This ending became available in Room 16. A better ending
Floyd | exists.) ***
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd |
Floyd | Would you like to RESTART, RESTORE a saved game, QUIT, or UNDO the
Floyd | last command?
Floyd | >
says (to Floyd), "Invite the press in for a cup of tea."
Emily strokes chin thoughtfully
Emily says, "okay, so it was definitely good to play that a second time"
DavidW asks, "Succumbs to the dark, eh?"
Emily says, "that might not be death"
DavidW says, "Sounds a bit like Cloak in the Cloak and Dagger comics."
Jacqueline asks, "I feel like the first ending we got might be the best?"
Emily says, "yeah, definitely"
DavidW says, "Cloak's darkness realm hungers in some vaguely threatening way."
Emily says, "but this most recent one was informative"
Jacqueline says, "Indeed."
DavidW says, "mmhm"
Jacqueline says, "I am going to head out, but feel free to poke at this a bit more if you'd like. I'll leave Perry running."
Jacqueline asks, "I will not be here next week. DW, can you sub?"
DavidW says, "I should be able to, yes."
Jacqueline asks, "Also, if 15 comes out, can you wait until the following week for me to be back?"
DavidW says, "Sure. We'll play something else."
Jacqueline exclaims, "Yay. Thanks!"
Emily says, "bye, Jacq!"
Jacqueline exclaims, "Bye!"
DavidW says, "I guess we only new inventory items we got from room 16 were the newspaper and singles? And I don't see any obvious use for those in rooms 17 or 18."
chaudmin says, ">give singles to press"
DavidW says (to chaudmin), "And they'll go off and buy coffee? You're dreaming."
Emily says, "I guess I could imagine that in a future episode, we might gain something interesting that we could show to the press, thus making their presence useful to us rather than an impediment"
DavidW says, "What I find refreshing about 18 Rooms so far is the commitment to branching narrative."
DavidW says (to Emily), "That's possible, yes."
Emily says, "yeah, though it makes me fear that by the time we get to episode 1, it's going to take Carolyn months to finish each one"
DavidW says, "hm. I think the way the geographic locations are strictly ordered is helping force some dovetailing there."
chaudmin says, "assuming we unlock one new ending for each room, that's still a lot of endings"
DavidW says (to chaudmin), "yeah."
DavidW says, "I suppose, in theory, focusing on the newspaper would set it alight, if we weren't being discreet."
DavidW says, "hmmm. I foresee a release where the black crystals in the car become useful for dealing with Jack of Shadows."
Emily says, "their presence does seem quite pointed"
Emily says, "I wonder how much planning Carolyn did before starting"

NB: ClubFloyd played the next installment as well. That transcript can be found here.




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